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Damn your feet that crushed and squashed thousands of grapes in the pool!
While we only have eaten those purple drupes in our wildest dreams
And did you just say you would make wine from those feet-ground fruits?


Glenn Sentes
For Nette Onclaud's ON YOUR FEET Contest
01-26-12

*Adjudged 1st Place

Copyright © Glenn Sentes | Year Posted 2012

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Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 2/2/2012 5:30:00 PM congrats on your 1st place win; this is a very unique and creative sijo, thinking outside-the-box :-) Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 2/2/2012 7:16:00 AM pounding on grapes with feet!.. wow, such visuals, glenn... congrats on your glowing win! Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/2/2012 2:31:00 AM Congratulations Glenn x Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 2/2/2012 12:15:00 AM Very nice. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/1/2012 9:06:00 PM Glenn, a very interesting sijo.. to enter in nette's contest.. truly enjoyed,..pd Login to Reply

Greg Stanley Date: 2/1/2012 7:17:00 PM Glenn, such an interesting poem. Very nicely done and congratulations on you 1st place win, Greg Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 2/1/2012 6:01:00 PM Nice poem,Glenn.Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest....keep flying pal..... Login to Reply

Jon Arno Date: 2/1/2012 5:41:00 PM Congratulations on your great write and the win in the contest. Jon Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 2/1/2012 5:09:00 PM "Grapestompers"-That is what some people call Italian girls. This is a good write and I see Nette liked it so much, she picked it number one in her contest. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/1/2012 3:38:00 PM This one was quite unique, Glenn. A big congrats on your number one win. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/1/2012 2:36:00 PM yes this never sounded very appealing to me either LOL maybe the yeast on peoples feet helped the wine ferment? Congrad's Light & Love Login to Reply

Bob Quigley Date: 2/1/2012 11:36:00 AM Congratulations on your first place win Glenn. Well done Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 2/1/2012 9:04:00 AM Glenn congrats on your great win..David Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/1/2012 9:00:00 AM congrats Glenn on a super first place win .. awesome write.. luv.. so honored to be sharing with u ... Login to Reply

Black Eyed Susan Date: 2/1/2012 8:18:00 AM ha! I have always thought it was disgusting that people stomp on grapes to make wine! creative idea for the contest - congrats on your win! Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 2/1/2012 8:00:00 AM What a unique theme!! Hooray for you and this great win!! Congratulations Glenn!! Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 2/1/2012 6:46:00 AM congrats on your top notch win, Glenn. A wine-stomping sijo is cool. Gwendolen Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/1/2012 5:26:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Nette's "On Your Feet" contest Glenn. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/28/2012 4:50:00 AM GLEN!!... thanks for entering my contest...just a sweet reminder: Sijo hasthree long lines. Each line varies between 14 and 16 syllables, with the middle line often the longest. The first line states a theme, the second line counters it, and the third line resolves the poem... so much potential here; perhaps we may want to check syll count.. will you??? salamat!.. :) huggs! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/26/2012 11:58:00 AM Wow everyone has found the inspiration to write today even me. Thank you for posting and sharing your poetry with us today. I enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Keep them coming Glenn. Love, Carol Login to Reply