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Prisoners of the Cemetery

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There is an old graveyard, silent, menacing Where many have gone but never been seen again We wondered if the inhabitants saw them trespassing And gave them no chance to ever live or reign Spider webs cover the graying entrance at night It is filled with old graves of prisoners, criminals Those who know the story believe there is no light To show the dark demons they’ve been seen by witnesses Moonlight reflects off the graves, destroying hopes It is assured that once entering here there is none Hearts who see this place come to the end of ropes Hanging by their necks until dead, it’s all over, done In the black skies there is seen a hint of a star The only reminder that somewhere is something good On this horrible eve, a reminder remains that afar There lives the possibility of reclaiming the neighborhood Something Spooky 8 to 16 lines Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin October 8, 2021

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Date: 10/26/2021 9:44:00 AM
"Hint of a star," "reclaiming the neighborhood" reminders that there is always hope of redemption! You set the creepiness, and hopelessness, of the scene so skillfully that the last stanza really stands out in comparison. Nicely done. Congratulations for your win! Sending you many blessings and a hug!
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Date: 10/24/2021 2:28:00 PM
Gina, congratulations on your winning placement with your bone chilling cemetery poem!
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Date: 10/24/2021 1:22:00 PM
Wow what a spooky write great job and congrats
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Date: 10/24/2021 12:38:00 PM
wow Regina this gave me goosebumps! many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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