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Prismed Face: An Abstraction

*Please note: 
I'm not in the throes of sadness.  Just a write for another poetry site.
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My eyes are half closed for I fear to see
what worry and anxiety have made of me.
All day I've been twisted out of shape,
wincing at my disheveled appearance.
Life has taken a toll with its interference.

My mirrored face is a prism, a color spectrum,
reflections that indicate the paths I've traveled.
It's no wonder I look completely unraveled
and seem to be moving in opposite directions.

I'm an abstract work of art, hastily brushed
with my own hand when I'm feeling rushed.
Blue when sadness tears my world in two,
Cadmium yellow on days when I feel mellow.

When heated anger tints my soul, my cheeks
flush with shades of red and buff. It's been weeks
since I've felt bold enough to paint with oils.
Misfortune leaves me feeling like used tin foil.

I must pull myself back together and gather
my thoughts. Untwist the ropes that tether me.
Too many worries have crisscrossed my face
and spying eyes I've come to intensely despise.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Goldsmith Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 12:44 PM
What a powerful write you have here. Great Picture for your write. Love your line, "Life has taken a toll with its interference." Life has taken on toll on everyone. Yes, "Untwist the ropes that tether me." Set us free... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed day writing away.........
Lane Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 12:48 PM
I no longer enter poetry soup contests, Paula. Too many are using AI and getting away with it. I'll challenge any human hand that writes as fair game, but taking accolades for something that's not their own shows a lack of integrity and shouldn't be tolerated. Thanks for reading me and leaving your sweet comments.
Hind Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 12:33 PM
Very deep, so much introspection. Did you paint that? It's an amazing picture. Poetry is amazing, too. :)
Lane Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 12:36 PM
Not my painting. I've never tried abstract but the thought is tempting. Who'd know if I'd meant it to be weird? lol Thanks, Paige.
Raven Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 12:00 PM
Hi Lin, once more, it is wonderful to be reading your excellent poetry. Your words sing off the page and into the mind. Your words paint such a wonderful canvas. Your poetry is as good as it ever was. Looking forward to reading much more Lin. Your friend always ..... Mike. XXX
Lane Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 12:02 PM
Thanks so much, Mike. I'm really happy to see you posting again.
Roni Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 11:48 AM
Excellent poem. Love it very much. Congratulations.
Lane Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 12:01 PM
Many thanks for the read and comments, Faruk.
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