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Prism

Prism sparkle through The trees, tickle all the leaves Laughter rustle breeze

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Courtney Dyer

Date: 11/26/2009 12:16:00 AM

Well done! Have a Happy Thanksgiving!

Tim Ryerson

Date: 11/24/2009 7:53:00 PM

You're gettin' GOOD at those Haiku's, Sara! Very challanging form isn't it? Keep 'um coming! - Tim

Colleen Bono

Date: 11/23/2009 1:35:00 PM

You have soup mail

Daver Austin

Date: 11/22/2009 7:43:00 AM

Lots to say in a few well chosen words. Love, daver

James Fraser

Date: 11/22/2009 7:16:00 AM

I can picture the leaves in gentle sway, as the wind tickles in nature's play, nice write Sara >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/21/2009 5:16:00 PM

Laughter is the best medicine and your choice of words here makes the invitation to the reader to see the visual of your descriptive words... nice write ... good job... keep sharing... luv...

Donna Golden

Date: 11/21/2009 4:55:00 PM

This haiku is filled with beauty and cheerful engergy! Hugs, Donna

P Sheart

Date: 11/21/2009 3:02:00 PM

So clever and witty, love it. Keep writing! Love Light Patty

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/21/2009 2:09:00 PM

hmmm maybe an "s" on rustle? I really like how you can hear the wind laugh! Light & Love

Brian Strand

Date: 11/21/2009 8:03:00 AM

Nice one especially L3 Sara.Rgds Brian

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/21/2009 6:48:00 AM

Joyous and uplifting haiku, Sara! You are truly gifted in painting images through this style of verse. Just three lines leave the reader with a sense of joy! Love, Carolyn

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/21/2009 4:58:00 AM

love this one -very imaginative. My first smile of the day. Robert