Justin Bordner Poet Epic

Prey On the Moment

There is a moment that stalks my solitude
the one where my soul breaks from your absence,
it lurks with the confidence of apocalyptic attitude,
from my fortitude a firecry of absolute need attacks resistance
revealing your fingerprints upon my heart, patterns in somatic multitude
making lust an onslaught of obsession, soul ignition, kiss cognition, partner permanence, 
there will be no heart barter, no angle of defense, just you and me in beautiful exactitude,

I discover you everyday, the omnipresence of your love's mainstay
warm on the ******** of my morning, leading me into creation,
I find your poetry in freedom's pain, where love and life play
and when pity drums a cold doubt I see your brave grin,
as the battles end with quiet fatigue you stay
strong and sweet, a promise pure within,
when night softens the body I lay
you take me to bliss again -

J.A.B.

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Eileen Manassian August 30, 2015 at 12:52 AM beautiful...... Justin Bordner August 30, 2015 at 2:25 AM She makes love beautiful Eileen...J.A.B.

Lucy Wangari May 18, 2015 at 5:57 AM Very nice Justin. Justin Bordner May 20, 2015 at 8:32 PM Love is very nice Lucy, especially when it blooms...J.A.B.

Constance La France April 30, 2015 at 9:43 PM Justin, congratulations on poem of the day with this beautifully penned write and thanks for visiting my poem, at the gallery. . . Justin Bordner May 3, 2015 at 8:22 PM You have the style of a sharp diamond my wise Poetess...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal April 27, 2015 at 9:20 PM Congratulations Justin (: You're the best! Always, Laura Justin Bordner April 28, 2015 at 3:17 AM Beautiful Laura, I congratulate you for your loving attitude. You battle true, the songs of triumph do indeed know you...J.A.B.

Kp Nunez April 27, 2015 at 8:47 PM Justin, the reason I rarely comment on your poems though I've read them since I joined is the overwhelming sense of inadequacy, the thought that my words wouldn't be enough to do justice to the work of art in front of me. So I go away silently. Call it cowardice, I call it shyness. So I just enjoy your works and let others speak for me. One thing I will say, reading your words has never left me feeling dirty, rather they validate the innate feeling. Thank you and congrats on your POTD!Kim :) Justin Bordner April 28, 2015 at 3:10 AM Its okay to be shy with your beauty, to be silent in your star heat, and you are never dirty in the truthful touch of your desire Kim...you earned your victory, you won with love...J.A.B.

Connie Marcum Wong April 27, 2015 at 4:30 PM So happy to see this wonderful poem selected as POTD Justin. Big congrats! Justin Bordner April 28, 2015 at 2:55 AM Thank you Connie, I am happy that this love is living proud with such honors...J.A.B.

Constance La France April 27, 2015 at 3:27 AM Justin, beautifully penned with many wondrous words and lines like fingerprints upon my heart, I love that, a perfect 7 from me and I want to thank you so much for the Honorable Mention in your What Is Your Hypocrisy Contest, I am very honored Justin Bordner April 28, 2015 at 2:49 AM Your poetry always pulses with genuine feeling about what it is to be a woman who won't surrender to grief, you teach us about what the honest heart must know to be heroic Broken Wings...you are a Poetess with wings of fire. The hands of love always leave a mark...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal April 25, 2015 at 12:36 AM "it lurks with the confidence of apocalyptic attitude" ..a most intense moment you speak of... I love all these lines..."kiss cognition"... I really like that, and the line "I discover you everyday, the omnipresence of your love's mainstay....warm on the erection of my morning, leading me into creation". And the last three lines are so full of affection and gentleness.. you begin so very intense and end in sweet bliss. It's magic, Justin. Amazing job..Always, Laura Justin Bordner April 25, 2015 at 3:57 PM You always please me with your eyes of sensual analysis Laura...the awakening of a heart into a love that can heal is very intense. The movement of emotions, desires and affection is the spirit of this moment, the balance of these hearts Laura...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal April 25, 2015 at 12:21 AM I'd love to hear your voice behind these words, because the rhythm and rhyme to it flows so very nicely. You've definitely got a style that is all your own. As I said in a comment reply, I am in love with this composition...your expressions heighten each love sensation. You describe this need, this lust, so eloquently. And your title "Prey On The Moment" is so perfect. Sometimes moments prey on us instead,; through the reassurance of love we face each battle so we may have more moments of bliss Justin Bordner April 25, 2015 at 3:15 PM To be in love with this compostion is to be in love with Chance...yes my Gothic Princess, the title speaks of moments that challenge the foundations of our existence, moments that ask no permission, they are confrontational in the most beautiful of ways. My voice is a moving temptation of love Laura...J.A.B.