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Prey

Sunlight barely makes it down to where I am and what comes is filtered through silt and the run-off from drains dribbling along the river's length. Dark shapes circle, never quite forming into a name. I have nowhere else to go. I brace against the tidal flow gripped by visions of a mouth stalking the weedy bottom, its widening gape ringed by teeth and holding ready the dark pit of a gullet. I feel the swipe of water swirled by what seems like a passing fin, smell its rank odour, and wait there for the bite.

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Date: 9/26/2022 5:25:00 PM
Nice personification, not being at the top of the food chain, not a good feeling!
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/28/2022 2:53:00 PM
Especially if there is nowhere to hide.. Appreciate your comments, Jeff. Regards

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