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Prevalence of Predators

Sharks in the ocean, killer whales - prevalence of predators in knee deep water, all because men know better. They, we - bring disaster to the shore, to the salty, silty, haven of children, couples, the old and young. The fascination of jaws, rows of sharp teeth, claws at our imaginations; not as lovely a ride as a dolphin does bring; gladly gambolling along with a friend. Sharks bite, out for a midnight snack… even in the sunny hours. Back to the salty, silty, haven - the vacation spot, vacated or kept on the land, not wanting to become surf and turf, not wanting an arm or leg to be separated in the foam, in the thrill of the wave. The wave washes onto the coconut beach. Ebb and flow of romance. Dark shadows, inviting and dangerous. Riveting, breathless - the tide is precipitous. Washed up, a half-eaten board. Bored or not, keep limbs on loungers, toes out of the sea. Don’t tow the line. 6/14/2023

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Date: 6/15/2023 8:13:00 AM
I'm with you Kim. Stay out of the ocean. Maybe I've seen too many shipwreck movies but if God wanted me in the ocean I'd be a mermaid or a fish. Good stuff h3ere with a good and important warning. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/15/2023 1:56:00 PM
I love the ocean. Still it is the wild…
Date: 6/15/2023 7:35:00 AM
Excellent read! We eat...and are eaten...what's wrong with this picture? Or right? love it! Magic, thrilling use of language. My wife says, we should stay out of the ocean especially now that we are older, our once rosy exterior looking a lot like the scales of yummy fish.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/15/2023 7:56:00 AM
LOL to your wife’s comment!! Thank you so much!!
Date: 6/15/2023 2:46:00 AM
Your knowledge of marine predators is fantastic. Thank God we only had one shark sixty years ago, May he rest in peace.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/15/2023 7:57:00 AM
May he rest in peace and not one replace him. Thank you, my friend!
Date: 6/14/2023 6:16:00 PM
Bears and coyotes roaming urban haunts... sharks invading shorelines... Old familiar habitats are morphing into predator playgrounds. A not-so-brave new world...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2023 7:10:00 PM
That is so true!
Date: 6/14/2023 4:14:00 PM
They are dangerous and they can put a damper on a vacation, best stay away from shark and whales infested waters, nicely penned, Kim, :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2023 7:10:00 PM
We must!
Date: 6/14/2023 2:40:00 PM
Very 'deep' are those predators in your lines!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2023 3:04:00 PM
Scary stuff!
Date: 6/14/2023 11:43:00 AM
Chilling impeccable ink! Excellent piece Kim. Hugs! xomo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2023 1:45:00 PM
How cool to hear from you! Believe it or not I was just wondering if you’ve written anything lately. Will go check in a bit!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2023 1:10:00 PM
How cool to hear from you! Believe it or not I was just wondering if you’ve written anything lately. Will go check in a bit!

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