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Present Rues In Blue Wayra

Tarnished tracks of thought converge at dead end unknown, frozen time in tunnel rusts on scarlet scale of past, stilled present disowned, rues in blue.
(English is my second language) August 17, 2019 Syllable count : 5/7/7/6/8 Checked on howmanysyllables.com Contest : Second Edition Of Wayra Sponsored by : Nette Onclaud

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Date: 8/22/2019 11:50:00 PM
Congratulations my friend. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/22/2019 5:20:00 AM
Congrats on your first place win, Subimal.
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Date: 8/22/2019 12:56:00 AM
This is just wonderful Subimal! Congratulations on your deserving First Place win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/21/2019 3:17:00 PM
Love the depth in your lines submimal, many congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/21/2019 2:49:00 PM
Love that first line! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/21/2019 2:10:00 PM
you did fantastic with the theme. A very well deserved win, Subimal. Congrats
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Date: 8/21/2019 1:46:00 PM
- I admire this ... well done :) - Congratulations on your win, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/21/2019 1:43:00 PM
close to perfection for one whose second language is english... an admirable write, subimal... thanks for entering my contest and applause on your top win!
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Date: 8/21/2019 1:41:00 PM
such depth! great poem, congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 8/17/2019 10:40:00 PM
Subimal, the deep artistic imagery of your poem conveys a sense of sad bitterness, and oh, it is so beautifully expressed. Exquisite poetry! It’s hard to believe that English is your second language. Warmest wishes always and best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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