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Prepared To Make Mistakes

We all have our views on the subject. A military officer 
on hearing I was pregnant asked me to consider having
an abortion. I know a young woman, the doctors told
her mom, that with her condition, she needed to be aborted.
She was not and is perfect with a beautiful family.

PREPARED TO MAKE MISTAKES

You saw baby bouncing on your knee
and the gifts the neighbors bring.
Blue and pink were twins,
the sparkle in your eyes
at graduation
and surprise they were there for you
at your end of days.
You smiled
as each smoothed your hair,
kissed you on the cheek.
You’d surely die
then think,
regretting dying before you drink
of their beauty,
as they wait in utero
dreaming of a mom
who’d care for them
   as she discusses their fate
with a stethoscope clad
impartial lad,
who has no stake,
who’s prepared
to make mistakes
blue and pink balloons
could pop
on a pin drop,
with no bounce,
no degree,
added to a pile of debris.

5/11/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Ray Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 8:03 PM
your lines touch deeply...your voice becomes a rational appeal...and you come thru clear in a lovely light
Rodrigues Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 5:38 AM
Thank you so much, Tim!
Proxenos Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 11:31 PM
Hi Kim congratulation on the honor bestowed on you of POTD - a much debated and heated topic of conversation and views that range from the ridiculous to the sensible and also sublime, very touching sentimental write my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 5:38 AM
Hugs and blessings to you too, Jennifer! Thank you!
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 19, 2022 at 5:43 PM
A heartfelt and beautiful reverence for life, no matter how tiny Kim. A belated Congratulations on your POTD honor. Blessings xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
May 19, 2022 at 6:44 PM
Thank you, sweet lady <3
Dietrich Avatar
May 16, 2022 at 10:44 AM
This is a very hot topic. Congrats on the POTD and for telling a side that needs to be heard. I think where it all gets so complicated is the rare stuff like incest, rape and the mother's health at stake. there ought to be a law to deal with those things. People should just use common sense in the first place and there would never even have to be a need for commonplace abortions.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 17, 2022 at 8:42 AM
I read about the methods years ago. To stay oblivious to the facts, that is truly sad. I just read what a classmate had posted. The doctor wanted to abort her daughter’s, according to him, unviable pregnancy, and her husband stopped the doctor. The young man just graduated from high school. It scares me to think how many pregnancies have been aborted by doctor’s recommendation that was wrong!! A woman I know also had a doctor tell her mother to abort her. She is a truly remarkable woman with a beautiful family. God help us!
Tor Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 5:24 PM
Congratulations Kim... God bless you
Rodrigues Avatar
May 16, 2022 at 6:23 AM
Thank you, Michael! God bless you too!
Ellison Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 3:41 AM
Along with the many others I add my POTD congratulations Miss Kim XOX
Rodrigues Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 3:26 PM
Thank you, Jack
George Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 2:28 AM
I missed seeing this great poem as POTD. This is an eye opener to all the irresponsible parents who brood on cruelly mutilating the fetus in the womb... Congratulations, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 3:25 PM
Thank you, Valsa
Anaya Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 8:01 PM
Congratulations on your POTD Kim. Just saw a movie today on the topic of abortion...a must see 'Happening' A French award-winning film. An adaptation of Annie Ernaux's eponymous novel, looking back on her experience with abortion when it was still illegal in France in the 1960s
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 9:11 PM
Thank you, Anaya
Wolf Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 7:54 PM
Congrats on POTD, Kim. A sensitive treatment of the most explosive issue of our times. May G-d help us!!!! In tears, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 9:11 PM
Thank you, Gershon
Gorelick Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 7:49 PM
Back with congratulations, Kim on your POTD!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 9:10 PM
Thanks, Robert
La France Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 5:42 PM
Kim, a powerful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings ~Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 6:24 PM
Thank you, Constance
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 5:00 PM
Congratulations, Kim, on your well-deserved honour. A thought-provoking, sensitive issue you have expressed with a powerful vocabulary. Warm wishes ~ mala
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 6:24 PM
Thank you, Mala
Watt Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 1:27 PM
Kim, I applaud your courage in addressing this thorny issue and I applaud the POTD you received. I applaud those women who have carried an unwanted baby to term and either chose to raise her child or offer it to another couple so they could raise a child they couldn't conceive. I believe children should have the right to choose as well.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 6:25 PM
Thank you, John
Mcgee Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 1:17 PM
Well written about a hard subject. Each choice does matter for that woman and is not always an easy one but a heart one. Congrats on your POTD.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 6:25 PM
Thank you, Jeanne
Romios Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 12:59 PM
Back!Congratulations Kim. You know my feelings....,they do not matters. Thrilled you got the POTD. IF Poets DONT UNDERSTAND, THE”pile Debris ”.... they are lost beings. Hiitler was a forerunner to aborting the earth of those in his way. I call Clinics...Camp Pro choice, the newest term.. Is camp Decision. God knows all we do. Pangie, Thanks Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 6:26 PM
Thank you, Pangie
Nicole Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 11:59 AM
God says in Exodus 20:13 & in Deuteronomy 5:17: "You shall not murder." Abortion is murder. Just from my observation and from in-depth study on this subject. I agree with Tommy's thought below, an unwanted child (due to the circumstances listed) can be adopted. I also agree with Victor. This is a touchy subject, but shouldn't be taken lightly. *Life is Precious* Your thoughts curl around my heart so deeply. Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 6:26 PM
Thank you, Brandy
Hankins Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 9:38 AM
Although I am pro-choice and a firm believer that a woman, with her doctor's advice, should make decisions regarding her body, congratulations on your P.O.T.D. Incidentally, I am also pro-life, believing that after a child is born they should have every provision to live a long, healthy, and productive life.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 6:28 PM
Thank you, Milton
Sands Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 8:55 AM
Congratulations for this important POTD Kim :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 6:28 PM
Thank you, Heidi
Calasibetta Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 8:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD! A difficult subject at best~every personal choice has its consequences. Beautifully penned and very moving piece. :)Paulette
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 6:28 PM
Thank you, Paulette
Kyser Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 7:33 AM
So well done, Kim. Keep up the thought-provoking writing! Congrats on the POTD
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 6:29 PM
Thank you, Jeff
Rigoler Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 7:31 AM
I am anti-abortion, unless the mother's life is in jeopardy. What baffles me is why this issue has become political. It's a moral and religious issue! Where is the constitutional separation of church and state? / Maurice
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 6:29 PM
True! Thank you, Maurice
Kavanagh  Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 7:27 AM
As you know Kim, I’m an agnostic, so I don’t feel bound to the scriptures, I’m not pro or anti abortion, just pro choice for women, nonetheless I respect your beliefs ,congratulations on potd, cheers David
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 6:30 PM
Thank you, David
Baker Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 7:13 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Kim. I appreciate your thoughts on this sensitive subject and identify with the fact that free will comes with choices we each must make; some will bring life and joy and others death and sadness, but we do have free will as given to us by God. My opinion, we should honor the gifts we are given. There are answers to the sometimes-difficult decisions we have to make in life, and sources of wisdom and Truth that can show us ways to deal with them. Blessings, Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 6:30 PM
Thank you, Bill
Alex Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 6:59 AM
Such an envisioning subject. Such a beautiful treatment of the theme. Great concept! Great poem! Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 6:31 PM
Thank you, Christuraj
May Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 6:35 AM
Life should not be something to throw in the trash, Congrats on POTD Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 6:31 PM
I agree, Joseph. Thank you
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