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Predator

He beat a rather hasty retreat As the ominous predator just Missed him by the skin of his teeth, Barely escaping with his life, he shook of the dust It was a watering hole he had visited often But he never had such a close call It was wise to be more careful then Or to not even drink there at all But thirst compelled him to go To take a risk, quickly this time But being just a bit too slow He found himself in the jaws of his foe So if ever you visit this watering hole Take heed, and drink with an urgent speed Or you'll end up like those unfortunate souls Whose bones you see scattered by the reeds

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/19/2013 4:40:00 PM
Well done, Joseph! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/19/2013 6:00:00 AM
Joseph congratulations on your win in the contest :) tc Wilma
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Date: 6/17/2013 11:09:00 AM
I can imagine all kinds of explanations for this poem.......very intriguing! Well done, Joseph!!
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Date: 6/16/2013 2:50:00 PM
Took me to a great spot of weary imagery. Clever move as I sip the water' without breath................ Looking over my shoulder.....I RUN!!!God bless you Joe!!!!//CONGRATS!!!
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Joseph May
Date: 6/16/2013 3:06:00 PM
God bless you too Rick....Thanks for my placement in your contest
Date: 3/13/2013 9:34:00 PM
Congrats, Joe. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph
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Date: 3/9/2013 7:30:00 PM
Joseph, I got one word for you.... "CONGRATULATIONS!" ;-)...PD
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Joseph May
Date: 3/10/2013 12:35:00 PM
I got two words for you PD...THANK YOU......hugs
Date: 10/30/2012 1:50:00 PM
Very good poem here Joseph!Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/30/2012 11:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poems in the "Good Enough" contest. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/30/2012 7:25:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this poem of yours, Joseph May! My hearty congratulation on your win! hugs:)LG
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Date: 10/30/2012 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in SandyIvy's "Good Enough" contest Joseph. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/30/2012 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in SandyIvy's "Good Enough" contest Joseph. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/29/2012 10:12:00 PM
Great write Joseph. Those poor animals have to make a choice. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/29/2012 8:24:00 PM
Joseph.. Congratulations with your wonderful and "Good Enough" poem in Sandy's contest. xox~PD
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Date: 10/29/2012 7:25:00 PM
:-) love your good win' thank you' Sandy
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Date: 4/11/2012 11:20:00 AM
congrats on the placement in the contest........~sashi
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Joseph May
Date: 4/11/2012 1:33:00 PM
thank you Sashi
Date: 4/11/2012 11:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "April Poem" contest Joseph. Love, Carol
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Joseph May
Date: 4/11/2012 1:33:00 PM
thank you Carol
Date: 4/11/2012 12:00:00 AM
Joseph, thank you for your wonderful entry... CONGRATULATIONS~ ;-) ALWAYS *PD
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Joseph May
Date: 4/11/2012 1:34:00 PM
thank you PD

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