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Precious Obsession

Work and toil, the precious obsession On the hunt, beyond day light, lover's cry Golden shimmer, envy's pride Treasured gift invisible to the eye Worthy storehouse beyond our realm Galaxy and systems, servers of knowledge on the side Treasured gift invisible to the eye Golden shimmer, envy's pride Obsession of wealth, wealth of understanding and truth American dream goes bankrupt; the untolerated lie Golden shimmer, envy's pride Treasured gift invisible to the eye Wicked riches shiny and tangible Lasting richness the prize on this wild ride Treasured gift invisible to the eye Golden shimmer, envy's pride For Jared's mirrored refrain contest, Thanks Jared for the challenge! It was a fun challenge!!

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Date: 4/2/2010 11:13:00 AM
nice
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Date: 3/20/2010 4:25:00 PM
very good!i luv it,thanx!i must work on more styles myself!
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Date: 3/19/2010 1:36:00 PM
Great write in this one that should do well in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing. Mom
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Date: 3/19/2010 9:27:00 AM
You did a great job with this challenge, Doris. I can't seem to get this form down, but your poem makes an excellent statement and you have my admiration. Love, Carolyn
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