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Side by side on a moonlight night like this A tender moment of romantic bliss You cup my face and we share a sweet kiss You pass me a coin to drop in the pool I’m to make a wish, that’s the golden rule I wish for a ring with a green jewel When I open my eyes, what do I see - My handsome boyfriend down is on one knee You utter those words; will you marry me? I am the happiest girl in the land An emerald ring is slipped on my hand Our wedding day arrangements must be planned! Scene chosen: Two sitting in front of a fountain Precious Moments Contest Sponsored by Kim Rodrigues Checked with how many syllables 03~07~17

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Lynn Marie

Date: 3/11/2017 10:19:00 PM

So lovely Jan :-) The sheer romance of your words is elegantly penned and the "coin to drop in the pool" is an ingenious touch. A beautiful classic love poem. Reminds me of a Walt Disney fairytale :-) A fave, 7++++ blessings, lynn

Jan Allison
Date: 3/23/2017 3:55:00 AM

Thanks Lynn:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/8/2017 7:59:00 PM

A great romantic write. Very touching. A Fav!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/9/2017 2:13:00 PM

Thanks Armand I shy away from doing romantic poems I must prefer humour:-) hugs Jan xx

Date: 3/8/2017 11:34:00 AM

All your poems are great! I'm working on a school poetry project where we research a poet and I would like to find a way to get in touch with you. Is there a way to email you a couple of questions about your career?

Jan Allison
Date: 3/8/2017 5:39:00 PM

:-)

Joseph May

Date: 3/8/2017 11:34:00 AM

A beautiful romantic write Jan..best wishes

Jan Allison
Date: 3/8/2017 11:46:00 AM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/8/2017 3:14:00 AM

Precious moments indeed that are inscribed into the heart forever to be cherished dear, Jan! A fabulous poem that rhymes well! A seven my friend and Happy Woman's Day!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/8/2017 11:08:00 AM

Thanks Demetrios:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/8/2017 12:35:00 AM

You didn't happen to find the three coins my first wife and I left there, did you? Lovely write Jan and best wishes...

Jan Allison
Date: 3/8/2017 11:08:00 AM

No I didn't see them Charlie lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 3/7/2017 8:43:00 PM

This is so romantic with great imagery~can imagine the whole scene! G/L in the contest! Enjoyed!~ hugs Che :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/8/2017 11:10:00 AM

Thanks Cheryl:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/7/2017 7:30:00 PM

Tender and sweet, my dear. Wish you good luck in the contest. So nice that you can be versatile in your writing. Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 3/8/2017 11:11:00 AM

Thanks Eileen I much prefer humour ... I leave the romance to you my dear Queen:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 3/7/2017 5:18:00 PM

A fairy tale come true.... Lovely Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2017 5:27:00 PM

Thanks Tim I leave romance to you and Chris poop is more my style lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 3/7/2017 5:07:00 PM

This is a poem that will touch many hearts, I know it touched mine. Nicely done my friend, good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2017 5:15:00 PM

I leave romance to you Chris you write it so so beautifully I struggle with it:-) hugs Jan xx

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 3/7/2017 4:53:00 PM

OH THIS is a winner

Jan Allison
Date: 3/23/2017 3:54:00 AM

It didn't place in the contest lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2017 4:57:00 PM

aww that is s kind comment .. I don't do romantic/slushy poems very well Jerry I much prefer humour - there is so much to inspire me - now do you want your back scrubbing lol:-) hugs Jan xx