''A Memory''

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"A Memory" __________ I remember when we sat together, and the breeze was a soft gentle feather- . . . at the fountain even in cold weather. We talked about our future plans and life, I was so very proud to be your wife- you would pick me some bright purple loose strife. We threw pennies in the water falling, and in the tangled trees birds were calling- . . . deep in the fountain goldfish were lolling. ________________________ March 2, 2017 Poetry/Rhyme/"A Memory Copyright Protected, ID 17- 881-367-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Lynn Marie

Date: 3/13/2017 1:19:00 AM

There is a quaintness to your words I find very endearing..a refreshing innocence. Lovely writing:-) a pleasure to read. blessings, lynn

Caycay Jennings

Date: 3/6/2017 7:30:00 PM

So tender and sweet! Hugs ... CayCay

Eve Roper

Date: 3/3/2017 4:30:00 PM

Beautiful 7 ~*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2017 7:22:00 PM

this is beautiful, just like she asked for. Mine is not beautiful (when I post it you will see what I mean). I bet you will be on the winner list!!

Lewis Raynes

Date: 3/2/2017 5:51:00 PM

Hi Broken Wings, my high school class just studied over this write, they loved it heaps. They also wrote their own based on your format. cheers ..... some hate poetry though lol.

Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2017 6:38:00 PM

Lewis, oh that's wonderful, I love to inspire!

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 3/2/2017 4:38:00 PM

I like your memory!

Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2017 6:45:00 PM

Thanks for visiting