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The bogeyman exists in the reality of life through drugs, alcohol, and violence. In pursuit of happiness, we oft say and do illogical things. And yet, we're confused when others fail to see where we are going. Sometimes, the building blocks of trust are laid on weak moral grounds. And relationships are in jeopardy; for we fail to communicate truthfully with each other. Time is neither good nor bad, but remains a constant, carrying away precious moments and heartaches with equal determination. Lust accomplishes the role assigned to it, but lacks the necessary heat required to ignite passion's flame. And so it is two-dimensional; for though it satisfies urges and longings, it's noticeably lacking depth. We are all slaves to our emotions, and oft find ourselves trespassing on the feelings of others, with immunity and impunity. And given the opportunity, hate, festering in a hardened heart, will flare up, and consume love from the insides, like cancer. (Free Verse) 12,22,2019

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Date: 12/22/2019 1:28:00 PM
Nice one Emile. intense one. Thanks for sharing
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/22/2019 4:36:00 PM
Thanks Gregory, I welcome your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/22/2019 10:47:00 AM
yes you are right... a deep and emotive poem.. we need to learn not to be slaves to emotions...
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Date: 12/22/2019 10:58:00 AM
Thanks Silent One, your comments are most welcomed and appreciated my friend, Emile.

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