Precious Child

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Laughing, smiling, playing in the light Gentle thoughts in hues so alive Children brighten the hearts who write Whispering hope for which souls strive Gentle thoughts in hues so alive Lovely words fall like stardust glances Whispering hope for which souls strive Coloring love in soft, slow dances Lovely words fall like stardust glances Thoughts of joy caress with inspiration Coloring love in soft, slow dances Arousing faith for a glad creation Thoughts of joy caress with inspiration Eager fun feeds the imagination Arousing faith for a glad creation Singing songs of pleasure and elation rhyme me rhyme me a poem poetry contest Sponsored by Eve Roper Image Number One Used Rhymezone to rhyme September 24, 2021

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Eve Roper

Date: 10/5/2021 8:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Regina , great flow in your pantoum verse. Hugs Eve

CayCay Jennings

Date: 9/25/2021 3:42:00 AM

Excellent write for that picture, perfect delivery of what you, as an artist, see and feel when you give it thought. Pantoum are fun to write but, at least for me, I need time to focus; no way I could pull it off with interruptions such as my family does to me, oh, lucky me (really but yeah - they need to respect MY TIME). Enjoyed ... CayCay

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/24/2021 8:24:00 AM

This is such a lovely piece of writing, Gina. I wish you the very best in Eve's contest. I haven't tackled it yet, but I love to do pantoums.