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Precarious

* a break in the clouds...in a birdbath, moonlight skates on thin ice ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Susan Gentry

Date: 1/27/2016 2:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win!

Skat A

Date: 1/26/2016 11:21:00 AM

CARRIE, Congrats on your monoku win. LOVE ** SKAT **

Thabang Ngoma

Date: 1/26/2016 11:04:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful Carrie…congrats on your win on this outstanding write*******(:heers!

Balveen Cheema

Date: 1/25/2016 6:57:00 AM

Awesome Carrie! A 7!Congrats on your well deserved placement!

James Inman

Date: 1/25/2016 5:06:00 AM

Beautiful imagery Carrie.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/24/2016 8:40:00 PM

CARRIE, thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "FINALLY, WE WON" if you'd like. Take Care. LINDA~

Paul Callus

Date: 3/11/2014 3:07:00 PM

visual expression at its best! // congrats on win. // paul

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/10/2014 5:10:00 PM

this paints a lovely picture, carrie, I love "moonlight skates on thin ice" - congrats on your 1st place win :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/10/2014 5:02:00 PM

Wow, my personal favorite so far. Congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2014 4:59:00 PM

wowowowow. AMAZING, and congrats.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/10/2014 4:41:00 PM

- One Amazing Line - Congratulations on your fine win, Carrie ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/10/2014 4:17:00 PM

Wow!!! Way to go ...SK

Constance La France

Date: 3/10/2014 2:47:00 PM

Congratulations on first place in my contest, sorry for the long delay in judging, I have been having some eyesight problems. Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2013 1:03:00 AM

You are amazing, Carrie, even in this small one line poem!

Peter Dome

Date: 12/13/2013 5:47:00 PM

A very clever and visual piece. well done. best wishes. Peter Dome.

Poet Tacito

Date: 12/13/2013 12:24:00 PM

Utterly beautiful! Picturing this makes me smile.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/13/2013 7:31:00 AM

Creative work..I got a chuckle..If I were skating on thin ice it would be more falling than skating..Ha! Ha!!..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara