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Pre - Valentine's Sky

I Delicious evening Furtive moon, modest stars 2023 but ancient Sky II Cooler, Eastern Cape evenings - delicious Blazing hot days, 40 degrees Celsius Give way to ancient ways, in the stars Only a few tonight (why?) And Venus perhaps? Two of the four stars in a box, outshone the rest - when Moon escaped the cloudy hedge A few belts with triune stars consoled me

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 2/14/2023 3:43:00 AM

Hello Anil. This is just beautiful and poetic as well. The sky stars coupled with valentine's is a wonderful combination. I hope you are remaining safe and well. Love and Blessings always on this special day. Yes, Namaste and Shalom. (smile smile smile)

Thomas Wells

Date: 2/8/2023 8:36:00 AM

Your study of the cosmos on starry nights is very much like how the ancients would view the heavens. The timid furtive Moon symbolizes the feminine. Perhaps you wait for her to appear as your Valentine. So much introspection conveyed here. Nicely done! -Thomas

Anil Deo
Date: 2/8/2023 7:25:00 PM

Dr. Wells, hallelujah. You add so much to the ports attempt here, not a reader who takes & subtracts. Thank you +++ tough in USA, & here, because racists & demagogues prostitute Democracy. Not adding as U

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/7/2023 10:18:00 PM

The revolving universe, Anil, nice to read your poetry again.. Harry

Anil Deo
Date: 2/8/2023 5:20:00 AM

Welcome back "home's tonpS, sir Harry. Trust your genes & resolve kicked the illness away, but we lost several Writers here including RicovLefanta (? Spelling) and leader of the board with Caren, L. M. Hankins. May they prosper in poetry & pure love now