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Praying Mantis Pet

Hello, I am a praying mantis from the tropics, a killer really, once I bit off the head of my lover; and then I ate him, yummy and then I was caught, I ended up in a pet store until one day she bought me. I am a strange pet for a girl to have and love, but it is so, few people realize we make amazing pets; no weirder than a rat or ferret or snake. My species is known for courage and fearlessness, in ancient times we were considered supernatural gods; but I have no powers except my praying posture, I like to be perfectly still with my for arms folded in prayer. Usually my girl feeds me small insects she finds, once when I was on a stroll I reached into her goldfish bowl; and ate her goldfish, oh my, was she upset with me, I like to grip her finger with my long legs. One day I escaped into the garden, oh delight, I ate a bunch of bugs by ambush and camouflage; you see I am the master of disguise, I can blend into the foliage and any background. My girl found me when I was trying to resemble a flower, she said I was a giveaway with my two bulging eyes; (and three small ones) darn it anyways, almost had freedom, but in truth I love my girl and the lovely nest she made for me. She has made it look like my tropical homeland, with a heater and plants on which I crawl and pray; there is never a lack of bugs to eat and I do love the light above, so yes I am an odd pet for a girl to love; but she calls me beautiful and that makes my wings flutter, and I go into my praying poise for her to praise . . . ________________________ August 12, 2016 Poetry/Personification/Praying Mantis Pet Copyright Protected, ID 16-817-962-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 8/13/2016 9:09:00 AM
Broken Wings, this is perfect, I have no clue what to do for this contest!!! Good luck :)-luloo
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Date: 8/13/2016 7:52:00 AM
Hi BW, nice write. When I was in the 4th grade I took a cocoon to school in a jar and Praying Mantises hatched out of it. I also had a couple of Ferrets much later. I prefer the Ferrets.
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Date: 8/13/2016 6:02:00 AM
Nice job on the strange theme:) All the best:)
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Date: 8/12/2016 5:55:00 PM
That was great to read, nice job !
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