Praying Mantis

He's silent and still;
his hands raised,
his palms saluting
the blue sky.

Silently he walks,
resembling a shadow
without a master.

Every movement and vibration
is sensed by his skin and ears.

When provoked,
he gives a devastating blow
to his opponents.

His black belt colleagues
regard him as the Praying Mantis
of the Province.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 4:02 PM
teddy, one of the best written on this topic! SEVEN!
Onclaud Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 5:28 AM
love the personification of the mantis; reminds me of the spirituality of martial arts.. huggs
Kimathi Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 5:15 PM
True, Nette. Martial arts and spirituality are interconnected. Sad how some use it to bully.... Thanks for enjoying my piece!! *^_^*
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