Prayer For Her, This Wounded Heart Healed

Prayer For Her, This Wounded Heart Healed

Please keep this dream in my lost life
remove painful sting and life filled with strife
Let her dance and sing another sweet tune
as I hold her under this, merciful God's moon.
 

An excerpt from:  "As I Hold Her Under This, Merciful God's Moon"
(written 7/26/2015)
For- Your Best Poem #2 contest, sponsor	Shadow Hamilton

Now Submitted for contest: July 19, 2019
Contest: Arbitrium Divisa 3
Sponsor: Gregory R Barden
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 7/31/2019 8:51:00 AM
Robert, Keep the dream alive indeed. Enjoying my coffee with your poem this morning. I never thought about posting an excerpt of a poem. Well done. -Richard
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Date: 7/23/2019 6:27:00 PM
Delightful, wonderful verse Write on James
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Date: 7/22/2019 9:04:00 PM
Beautiful !
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Date: 7/22/2019 3:03:00 AM
such a moving poem Robert congrats on PORD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/21/2019 10:32:00 PM
Powerful poetry. This type of prayer will heal every would without any delay. Congratulation for POTD. Hugs............//Manmath//
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Date: 7/21/2019 6:35:00 PM
In dreams, anything is possible. Longing, and the tender touch of love wrap around these words. Moments from your heart. Congratulations Robert, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 7/21/2019 5:23:00 PM
A 'sweet as sugar' POTD. Congrats! Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 7/21/2019 2:41:00 PM
Very soulful write. Nice job. Keep at it.
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Date: 7/21/2019 2:07:00 PM
I stand in awe of this gem Robert - truly a shining star chosen as POTD and an honor so very deserved - congratulations dear friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/21/2019 1:05:00 PM
- Lovely prayer, Robert - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/21/2019 11:16:00 AM
My dear friend, your moving poem touches my being so very deeply. Such a beautifully tender plea expressed from the depths of your poetic heart and soul. This exceptional and emotional gem is inspiring, Robert. A potent and passionate masterwork. A fav! Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/21/2019 10:45:00 AM
All your poems are POTD worthy, and this one is no exception. Congratulations on such tender expression. I wanted to read the whole poem and couldn't find it. Can you send it to me?
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Date: 7/21/2019 10:37:00 AM
It is such a moving poem,, another excellent verse my friend. Congratulations on POTD
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Date: 7/21/2019 10:01:00 AM
What a moving verse from a loving heart! such drama in so few lines And a true friend and supporter to top it all off. Congratulations and take a well deserved bow. Blessings, Panagiota
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Date: 7/21/2019 9:14:00 AM
How beautiful. Congratulations on POTD my dear friend ....Maria Hugs
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Date: 7/21/2019 8:52:00 AM
Dear Robert, only you have the power to extract that mighty pen...just like the Excalibur...and with it when it bleeds create such poetic chivalry...I raise my goblet to your knighthood and congratulate! you with your Conquest of POTD!!...sending Maid Marian lol...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 7/21/2019 8:08:00 AM
Wonderful Robert. Excellent! Congratulations on POTD. Charlie
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Date: 7/21/2019 7:53:00 AM
Lovely piece Robert! I am sure that Greg will love it too. Congratulations for your POTD my dear poetry friend. Have a wonderful day! xomo
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Date: 7/21/2019 6:40:00 AM
Congratulations on getting the poem of day:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/21/2019 5:48:00 AM
Congrats on potd my friend
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Date: 7/21/2019 2:41:00 AM
A poem in its own right Robert, a well deserved POTD honour. Tom
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Date: 7/21/2019 2:29:00 AM
Your outshining poetry deserves the honour and recognition of your avid readers, fellow poets and friends.. Congratulations, Robert, on your POTD! Very delighted to see you reveling in the pleasure, glee and satisfaction of the Light and Beauty of your golden pen and perceptive poetry.. My warmest wishes. God bless you.
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Date: 7/21/2019 1:30:00 AM
I am so happy to see this poem honored as POTD Robert! This is so beautiful Robert. A Fave from me! xxoo : )
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Date: 7/20/2019 6:50:00 PM
Gold! Keep holding, poet. In the name of beauty and on behalf of all of us. God bless you. P.S.: A potded gold) Congarts, Robert.
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Date: 7/20/2019 6:39:00 PM
A fervent prayer dipped into the light of Faith.. the sweetness of dreams .. the secrets of existence.. the taste of bliss blessed with God's Grace.. A wonderful rendition that quenches an avid reader's thirst for an outstanding beauty! A win for me and a cherished fave.. A great pleasure to read your captivating poetry, Robert. My warmest wishes. Blessings.
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