Prayer For Her, This Wounded Heart Healed

Prayer For Her, This Wounded Heart Healed

Please keep this dream in my lost life
remove painful sting and life filled with strife
Let her dance and sing another sweet tune
as I hold her under this, merciful God's moon.
 

An excerpt from:  "As I Hold Her Under This, Merciful God's Moon"
(written 7/26/2015)
For- Your Best Poem #2 contest, sponsor	Shadow Hamilton

Now Submitted for contest: July 19, 2019
Contest: Arbitrium Divisa 3
Sponsor: Gregory R Barden
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Theraven Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 8:51 AM
Robert, Keep the dream alive indeed. Enjoying my coffee with your poem this morning. I never thought about posting an excerpt of a poem. Well done. -Richard
Lee Sr. Avatar
July 23, 2019 at 6:27 PM
Delightful, wonderful verse Write on James
Rodrigues Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 9:04 PM
Beautiful !
Allison Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 3:03 AM
such a moving poem Robert congrats on PORD:-) hugs Jan xx
Dalei Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 10:32 PM
Powerful poetry. This type of prayer will heal every would without any delay. Congratulation for POTD. Hugs............//Manmath//
Nicole Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 6:35 PM
In dreams, anything is possible. Longing, and the tender touch of love wrap around these words. Moments from your heart. Congratulations Robert, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Wolf Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 5:23 PM
A 'sweet as sugar' POTD. Congrats! Best wishes, Gershon
Dunlap Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 2:41 PM
Very soulful write. Nice job. Keep at it.
Proxenos Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 2:07 PM
I stand in awe of this gem Robert - truly a shining star chosen as POTD and an honor so very deserved - congratulations dear friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 1:05 PM
- Lovely prayer, Robert - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ashley Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 11:16 AM
My dear friend, your moving poem touches my being so very deeply. Such a beautifully tender plea expressed from the depths of your poetic heart and soul. This exceptional and emotional gem is inspiring, Robert. A potent and passionate masterwork. A fav! Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
Wanter Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 10:45 AM
All your poems are POTD worthy, and this one is no exception. Congratulations on such tender expression. I wanted to read the whole poem and couldn't find it. Can you send it to me?
Roper Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 10:37 AM
It is such a moving poem,, another excellent verse my friend. Congratulations on POTD
Romios Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 10:01 AM
What a moving verse from a loving heart! such drama in so few lines And a true friend and supporter to top it all off. Congratulations and take a well deserved bow. Blessings, Panagiota
Williams Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 9:14 AM
How beautiful. Congratulations on POTD my dear friend ....Maria Hugs
Warrior Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 8:52 AM
Dear Robert, only you have the power to extract that mighty pen...just like the Excalibur...and with it when it bleeds create such poetic chivalry...I raise my goblet to your knighthood and congratulate! you with your Conquest of POTD!!...sending Maid Marian lol...^WW^ :o)
Messina Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 8:08 AM
Wonderful Robert. Excellent! Congratulations on POTD. Charlie
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 7:53 AM
Lovely piece Robert! I am sure that Greg will love it too. Congratulations for your POTD my dear poetry friend. Have a wonderful day! xomo
Y. Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 6:40 AM
Congratulations on getting the poem of day:-) Alexis
One Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 5:48 AM
Congrats on potd my friend
Cunningham Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 2:41 AM
A poem in its own right Robert, a well deserved POTD honour. Tom
Riabi Dziri Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 2:29 AM
Your outshining poetry deserves the honour and recognition of your avid readers, fellow poets and friends.. Congratulations, Robert, on your POTD! Very delighted to see you reveling in the pleasure, glee and satisfaction of the Light and Beauty of your golden pen and perceptive poetry.. My warmest wishes. God bless you.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 1:30 AM
I am so happy to see this poem honored as POTD Robert! This is so beautiful Robert. A Fave from me! xxoo : )
Ravidas Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 6:50 PM
Gold! Keep holding, poet. In the name of beauty and on behalf of all of us. God bless you. P.S.: A potded gold) Congarts, Robert.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 6:39 PM
A fervent prayer dipped into the light of Faith.. the sweetness of dreams .. the secrets of existence.. the taste of bliss blessed with God's Grace.. A wonderful rendition that quenches an avid reader's thirst for an outstanding beauty! A win for me and a cherished fave.. A great pleasure to read your captivating poetry, Robert. My warmest wishes. Blessings.
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