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Power of Silence

one, silent inside is never torn by the cacophony outside
October.4.2022 ~Placed First~ The Power of Silence Poetry Contest Sponsor- JCB Brul
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Anaya Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 6:39 PM
Awe, to get away from the discord, Valsa this is true peace, congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 9:58 AM
I like the contrast with cacophony . Congrats on your win.
Kendrick Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 5:52 AM
Truth be told. I enjoyed reading your winner. Way to go. Congratulations. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Andresen Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 1:31 PM
- Sounds very peaceful... in this silence, Valsa - Beautiful written :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Kauffman Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 10:08 AM
So true my friend! You have stated the reality of the power of the peaceful inner soul at one with itself as a true defense against the chaos that rages outside of us. A wonderful poem spoken in simple elegance leaving a soft footprint of vibrant images. Congratulations. Sending you many blessings dear friend!
Sambourne Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 9:56 AM
Wonderfully enticing! Inner silence is bliss. Congratulations on a fine write. Be well. Brian
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 8:52 AM
Congratulations on your win with this marvellous Monoku!
Wolf Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 2:50 PM
Powerful point you've made here, Valsa. So true. Those who build themselves a strong foundation -- from the inside out, and not the opposite -- can withstand the external upheavals. :) Gershon
Messina Avatar
October 5, 2022 at 6:59 PM
Awesome entry for the contest, Valsa. Best wishes in the contest. Sending love...Charlie
George Avatar
October 5, 2022 at 9:32 PM
Thanks a lot Charles ! Stay Blessed....
Baker Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 9:12 PM
So true, my friend. Fine entry for the Monoku contest. Bill
George Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 9:30 PM
Hi Bill, thanks a lot ! Blessings !
Kauffman Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 4:39 PM
True! When we are at peace and at rest the chaos simply cannot penetrate our serenity and holy oneness. Nicely written. Best wishes for the contest dear friend. Hugs and blessings!
George Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 9:29 PM
You have said it so well. One who is at peace with himself cannot be disturbed by anything external. Thank you dear Sam for your appreciation and best wishes. Love and Hugs
DiMino Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 2:47 PM
Love it! In the silence all is still...now I know the meaning of a word-drop, and the ripple voice of eternal sea....
George Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 9:26 PM
Thanks a lot Joe. Your encouraging words are much appreciated....
Andresen Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 12:54 PM
- ... can feel it in the soul ... lovely - Best wishes in the contest, Valsa :) - hugs
George Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 9:25 PM
Thanks for your appreciation and Best wishes, dear Smile. Love and hugs !
Leffanta Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 11:01 AM
Silence is as refreshing as water! Enjoyed! Aloha!
George Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 9:24 PM
Quite true dear friend. Thanks a lot !
Callus Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 10:29 AM
Well reasoned, Valsa! When we are one with silence, nothing disturbs our connectivity. ~ Regards // paul
George Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 9:23 PM
Glad to know you liked my monoku. Paul you are master of all teeny andcryptic forms of poetry like haiku and tanka. Thanks for your kind visit.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 8:19 AM
Deep thoughts, Valsa. Your poems are always a profound experience to read.
George Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 9:17 PM
Feel so delighted. Thanks a lot Mala....
Poet Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 7:30 AM
Very beautifully said, Valsa. Nothing soothes our spirits more than inner serenity in the midst of chaos and noise.
George Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 9:16 PM
A person with inner peace remains calm even in the midst of turmoil. Thanks friend for your lovely response.
Pandit Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 6:44 AM
Inner peace is indeed powerful. Well said Valsa. Best to you.
George Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 9:13 PM
Inner peace is what matters ! Thanks a lot Vijay !
Gentile Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 6:27 AM
What a lovely thought to contemplate ! Well done Valsa! Happy Tuesday!!
George Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 9:13 PM
Thanks a lot Mike for your reaching across and your comment !
Buhagiar Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 6:08 AM
Great contrast.
George Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 9:12 PM
Thanks a lot Victor !
Rodrigues Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 5:37 AM
Yes, we can have inner peace, even when surrounded by a torrent! God bless you, Valsa!
George Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 9:11 PM
Yes, indeed ! Thanks a lot Kim !
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