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Poverty

The poor are lazy, languid, and loafing – the rich rut, Is this why many people of my nation have no hut? Isn't the concept: every rich is industrious, a myth? Isn't there a great gulf betwixt a blacksmith and a goldsmith...? I know my rickshaw-puller neighbor, born in penury, His ancestors were poor too for many a century; Can I judge his hardships his sin or the sin of his dad? Or the transgression of a system that has gone so bad...? I have seen the rich climbing the ladder of life briskly, The branches of trees of mammon, they catch hold so quickly; Hard work and calculative effort, no doubt, are in them, Don't cells of dishonesty occupy their root and stem...? By tilling the earth and breaking rocks pennies the poor earn, In torn rags they shiver in cold; in summer sun they burn; Is begging a fashion that the poor bejewel them with? Doesn't shame cut them to pieces, within, like grass in a scythe? Poverty is a curse and not a blessing, the world knows, Hunger, thirst, homelessness, and illnesses paucity sows; Undernourished children, like cattle, are pushed to labor, The poor are, often, abhorred and loathed by each rich neighbor...! Isn't fighting poverty a duty of every person? Doesn't, by the vile of inequality, crises worsen? God has made the mammon for all - this fact each one should know, The concept of living and letting live, each should follow...!!! 28 March 2023 Writing Challenge - 'P' Words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Rhymes Checked At: Rhyme Zone Syllables Checked At: How Many Syllables

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Date: 4/3/2023 4:31:00 AM
Christuraj, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 3/30/2023 7:04:00 PM
A lovely and very touching poem, Alex. Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/30/2023 10:04:00 AM
- A touching poem ... to see the truth in the eyes, Alex :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/30/2023 10:35:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 3/30/2023 6:37:00 AM
Eloquent. Full of hurt, but the hurt exclaimed poetically. Congratulations on your win, Christuraj!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/30/2023 10:35:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 3/29/2023 11:06:00 PM
Your words are are so true Christuraj and your questions so deserving of answers. Lovely poem. Beautiful sentiment. Congrats for your win.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/30/2023 10:34:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 3/29/2023 11:00:00 PM
"Undernourished children, like cattle, are pushed to labor, The poor are, often, abhorred and loathed by each rich neighbor...!" A beautifully written poem on Poverty. Every aspect of life is touched and also states how the society views the poor. We can never say that the rich become rich because of their merit and the poor remain poor because of their laziness or defect. This beautifully rhyming poem deserves to be placed even higher.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/30/2023 10:34:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 3/29/2023 8:48:00 PM
Congratulations!!!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/29/2023 10:05:00 PM
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Date: 3/29/2023 3:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Dear Christuraj. You and I - both have seen poverty in reality...you have portrayed the picture with compassion, and kindness. BW~ Mala
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/29/2023 10:04:00 PM
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Date: 3/29/2023 2:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a Rhyme write. Love this one. Have a blessed day writing away....................
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/29/2023 10:04:00 PM
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Date: 3/29/2023 12:22:00 PM
A very engaging well penned piece of poetry. Congratulations on your win Christuraj :-)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/29/2023 10:04:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 3/28/2023 3:54:00 AM
I love this and celebrate the fact that soupers like yourself share such a compassionate and caring approach. Oh, and also excellent poem!
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Date: 3/29/2023 10:04:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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