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Pouting In the Rain

The heavy weight of wet leaves plops on pansy’s heads not mine washing pollen from the air lover’s bedding wet!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/1/2011 11:44:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Debbie. Thanks for the advice : )
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Date: 5/24/2011 6:31:00 AM
Wow...just...wow. I am floored. I feel this.
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Date: 5/23/2011 6:54:00 PM
And so it goes here too, but no tornados anyway. Thanks for your comments. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/23/2011 5:50:00 PM
Wet And Wild~settle down please......,-)....I want you to try my "Trickle Down Style" just write one to four words per line ~ I'm serious.......watch how your mind wanders and new light arrives(Thats why I have the space) it gives that fraction of a second to drift///Blessings to you ~^Rick///I will wait for you to advise me when it has been penned ~Jack out of the box please ~:0
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Date: 5/23/2011 5:40:00 PM
What a meaningful images conveying your thought with visuals, Debbie
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