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Pouring Rain

The rain has come.. Heavy pouring rain.. Buckets of rain falling from the sky.. Dark skies.. It is.. A soulful, soothing sound of rain.. Enhances a peaceful mind.. There is only this moment in time.. I and the heavy, pouring rain.. I can dance in the rain.. I am one with the rain.. Rain invigorates.. Rain cleanses.. Cleanses my soul.. Rain soaks through me.. Soaks through my entire body.. I dance in the rain.. "As the raindrops are dancing on my skin" Completely saturated I am.. A taste of freedom I feel.. Liberating and breathtaking.. The rain has come.. I am the rain..

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Date: 5/1/2018 8:42:00 PM
Robertina, I, too, love the rain and I love your compelling and captivating poem. Rain is transforming, in and of itself, and with life on Earth. It has the power to renew and remodel the world around us much like you have the power to renew and remodel the world within yourself - so in that way, I agree with you, you are the miracle of rain. A deep and provocative poem of beautiful introspection. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Robertina B.
Date: 5/1/2018 9:44:00 PM
Thank you so much for visiting, Susan!! Your lovely words made my evening!! All the best to you!!
Date: 3/21/2018 9:21:00 AM
Oh I love the rain Robertina. And your poem expresses my own feelings as if we know each other. Beautiful!
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Robertina B.
Date: 3/21/2018 2:46:00 PM
"Thank you so much for your feedback, Shadow of the Past".. That is awesome, we both feel the exact same way about the rain.. It is as if we know each other!! Most people complain about the rain..
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Robertina B.
Date: 3/21/2018 2:46:00 PM
"Thank you so much for your feedback, Shadow of the Past".. That is awesome, we both feel the exact same way about the rain.. It is as if we know each other!! Most people complain about the rain..

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