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...inspired by 'Old Song' by Hart Crane Your smile took issue with the sun, a flash of purest fire; it blinded me to look upon you, glowing with desire! Now you are lost to me I know, and as I sleep I pray that distant orb's full fiery glow will keep you safe alway. Your face will flicker to a haze, a fading memory; and I shall spend my waning days in shades of misery.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/6/2009 3:20:00 PM
wow! this is absolutely wonderful....it flows really well n tells a story from the heart....nice work!...Maryam~
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Date: 4/6/2009 12:55:00 PM
Beautiful poem Keith. Though I think the last line might be improved with something like "in shades of misery", or "in twilight's misery". "adrift" suggest a boat, or some kind of sailing, which doesn't quite fit.
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Date: 4/6/2009 12:37:00 PM
Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts in a creative way. I like the title. Enjoyed this one. Keep on writing and sharing your poetry with us. Karen
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Date: 4/6/2009 9:48:00 AM
Beautifully dripping with passion. I love the title as all too often it is not until we have lost a love that we realize just how much we loved them. Sadly that is often too late. Excellent! Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/6/2009 9:12:00 AM
nicely done. loved the last stanza
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