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Portrait

You painted a portrait The lines were severe The color was harsh No vibrance found here. Youth had diminished The sounds of goodbye Friends that were cherished Even thoughts of suicide. You painted a portrait No room for soft colors It made others frown, Misunderstand, Sometimes shutter. Does time really show In faces and clothes the map of our lives The roads that were hoed. Will one day we live and Stop pleasing the others, And walk down new Paths Climbing Mountains not gutters. You painted a portrait It's so sad to see The evidence of life Stolen from miseries. Praying for life, For God's second chance, Yet life slips away, And pain still enhanced. You painted a portrait The sadness was real. It showed in both eyes Reflected in tears. But how do you change What has happened inside? To cleanse away pain To remove all that has died? You painted a portrait Then stuck in a sparkle Could that be a sign There is still life before us? It must start in the walk And end with a jog, Climb mountains not mole hills And sing right-out-loud. Yes you can! Just believe! This could happen, you'll see! It's in the step out the door, It's in the shine of your teeth. Remove all the barriers, Repaint all the scenes That covers the shadows Rub salve on the stings. You'll be light as a feather and sing many songs, Paint pictures, write stories, Release all the flaws. You painted a portrait In the end it will be Not the tears that have fallen But the strength to succeed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 3/5/2022 1:09:00 PM
A beautiful sad but true, change is a tough one for most of us and can be a good thing as well. Love your rhyme Kelly!
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Kelly Besaw Gallo
Date: 3/7/2022 7:37:00 PM
Thank you Anya. It's not one of my favorite poems but it's rockin' out here on poetry soup! I appreciate your thoughtful words. Kelly
Date: 2/21/2022 10:48:00 AM
Great piece Kelly Besaw Gallo, into the psyche and psychology of both side of ones life's journey. Reality and possibilities . B. J. "A" 2
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Kelly Besaw Gallo
Date: 2/21/2022 11:30:00 AM
Thank you William! Your feedback means a great deal to me. The psyche can take us down some crazy roads, but I've learned it's what we do with it that ultimately can change the course of our lives. We just need to find the courage to do it. Thanks again. Kelly
Date: 2/21/2022 10:44:00 AM
Oh, my! What an amazing poem! Truly, a beautifully written piece. Bravo!
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Kelly Besaw Gallo
Date: 2/21/2022 11:36:00 AM
Thank you Franci! Writing this piece was just natural for me as it reflects many parts of my life and the lives of others around me. It appears to be my most widely read poem so I appreciate your comments. It encourages me to continue working on this craft and...it's cheaper than therapy! Thanks again for your kind thoughts.
Date: 2/20/2022 6:23:00 PM
Beautifully done.
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Kelly Besaw Gallo
Date: 2/20/2022 8:25:00 PM
Milton, Thank you so much! I love feedback --good or bad. I'm an amateur in the field of poetry writing but continue to hone my craft. This poem, for me, is a self-reflection of change and how difficult it can be but through choice we can make it happen. Thanks again!

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