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portents sky darkens deeper and deeper turning toward the gloom of pseudo night. silence in the trees leaves batten down their fragility. far out past Christian Island the rumbling, grumbling begins, slowly stalking the land of summer dreams, echoing and emerging into my bay the sky is having a tantrum as a frustrated child stomps about my roof spilling rushes of beating rain. flowered faces once turned toward the sun now droop their heads beneath the watery onslaught. roots quiver with expectation of streams of sustenance renewing the earth, refreshing the air. nature takes care of its own. we shelter as a tortoise in our cabin. peering out disconsolate at having our reverie so thoughtlessly interrupted.

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Date: 9/18/2017 12:10:00 AM
Its one of the best descriptions of a storm I ve had the pleasure to encounter. Worthy poet, write on
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/18/2017 9:00:00 AM
As I write this reply there is another storm coming in over the bay. Thank you for your comment.
Date: 9/16/2017 10:39:00 AM
. .lol . ... "reverie" "interupted" ... that's funny to we .. thanks for that ...
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/16/2017 11:01:00 AM
Yep! thats the way the cooky crumbles. Y'all are entirely welcome. People can become such idiots when on vacation.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/16/2017 10:59:00 AM
That is the attitude of the gorbbies. When they are here on vacation it is a personal affront if the weather behaves badly. I plays it as I sees it.
Date: 9/16/2017 2:40:00 AM
Haha, you're getting there my friend, people are more and more finding your poems, and they're worth it! This stanza is my favorite here: "the sky is having a tantrum as // a frustrated child stomps // about my roof spilling // rushes of beating rain." Wonderful poem.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/16/2017 2:48:00 AM
Darren I am happy to see you here. Thank you for your continuous encouragement

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