Portents

portents

sky darkens deeper and deeper 
turning toward the gloom
of pseudo night.  silence in the trees 
leaves batten down their fragility. 

far out past Christian Island
the rumbling, grumbling  begins,
slowly stalking the land of summer dreams,
echoing and emerging into my bay

the sky is having a tantrum as 
a frustrated child stomps 
about my roof spilling 
rushes of beating rain.

flowered faces 
once turned toward the sun
now droop their heads
beneath the watery onslaught.

roots quiver with expectation
of streams of sustenance
renewing the earth, refreshing the air.
nature takes care of its own.

we shelter as a tortoise 
in our cabin. peering out 
disconsolate at having our 
reverie so thoughtlessly interrupted.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Breedt Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 12:10 AM
Its one of the best descriptions of a storm I ve had the pleasure to encounter. Worthy poet, write on
Cresswell Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 9:00 AM
As I write this reply there is another storm coming in over the bay. Thank you for your comment.
Stars Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 10:39 AM
. .lol . ... "reverie" "interupted" ... that's funny to we .. thanks for that ...
Cresswell Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 11:01 AM
Yep! thats the way the cooky crumbles. Y'all are entirely welcome. People can become such idiots when on vacation.
Cresswell Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 10:59 AM
That is the attitude of the gorbbies. When they are here on vacation it is a personal affront if the weather behaves badly. I plays it as I sees it.
White Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 2:40 AM
Haha, you're getting there my friend, people are more and more finding your poems, and they're worth it! This stanza is my favorite here: "the sky is having a tantrum as // a frustrated child stomps // about my roof spilling // rushes of beating rain." Wonderful poem.
Cresswell Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 2:48 AM
Darren I am happy to see you here. Thank you for your continuous encouragement
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