Popeye's Gal

Not what you’re used to, am I A far cry from the wild and wooly gals a horrified vestigial virgin ravaged by time am I. Not what you’re used to. Am I? Not what you’d ever thought could exist in a package so mixed of pink metal nails and kittens tails. Not what you’re used to, am I. A cosmic leap into the proximity of dichotomy The Yin hole in the Yang’s sperm like shape. Am I the beginning to your end? Not what you’re used to I am.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Peranteau Avatar
July 29, 2009 at 11:56 AM
This is a great poem Deborah ! TY for sharing! And thank you for your intrest in "Victuals' ! "Debar",.. In my poem "Victuals,..my point was,..I did'nt have the right to keep from souls the awesome ,in this case, taste,.. flavor of the fine food presented to me ! james
Brown Avatar
July 29, 2009 at 9:44 AM
Thank you for sharing your splendid poetry with us today Deborah. This is totally awesome. Love, Carol
Weber Avatar
July 29, 2009 at 7:02 AM
This one's a fun one to read, Debbie! I enjoy the challenging tone of the work, something all men hope to find in a woman: a free mind. Warm regards, John.
Goff Avatar
July 28, 2009 at 8:10 PM
one of your finest! Deb!! jim
Richards Avatar
July 28, 2009 at 6:57 PM
You are keeping him on his toes!! Not being what he's used to.....good for you!! :)
Burton Avatar
July 28, 2009 at 12:35 PM
:) enjoyed this alot.... the questions and the lesson, my opinion. Enjoy your day.
Jenkins Avatar
July 28, 2009 at 11:04 AM
And again another solid sassy kick in the balls!!! lol!!! love it! x
Fraser Avatar
July 28, 2009 at 10:02 AM
Kool poem Deborah, thank you for your comments on " Even Elephants Dream " your version was neater and i have changed it, thank you>>James
Calvanese Jr. Avatar
July 28, 2009 at 9:57 AM
In regards to your inquiry, to the Illest of Reasons: Four joints are knuckles. pancreas releases adrenaline which rushes in at such a high volume cuts off our conscience-right-wrong. cowardly beings are the two extremes of human kind- the sick-minded and the overzealous brutes. who both have no idea who they are, only what they do.
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July 28, 2009 at 9:52 AM
Wow, love the imagery here. Great job, Deborah =]
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