Poorly Chosen Words

I often speak to the moon 
In quatrain 
And verse 
Asking 
Deliberate 
Questions
Of her

She Responds 
As all beautiful 
Visions do
And weeps for 
My garish 
Words
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Burch Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 7:24 PM
Oh!! Tomas this is beautiful!! I have no words to pay it justice. Well done my friend! Hugggs. Deb
Vincent Marra Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 8:22 PM
Oh Deb You're too much kind to me! Thank you kindly
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