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Edwin Baldwin

Date: 7/10/2011 1:56:00 PM

Congratulations nette!!! There's nothing like the power of nature to help us escape our ego. A very profound haiku.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/10/2011 11:36:00 AM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/9/2011 7:43:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS! again...hehehe....deserving for this win...super!!!!*-*junjun

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/9/2011 3:59:00 PM

Congrats Nette luv on your fantastic win with this brilliant beauty .. perfection as always my friend..oh wow..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/9/2011 12:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Nette in John Moses Freeman's "The Precept: Nature's Haiku"contest. Love, Carol

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 7/9/2011 11:22:00 AM

Excellent win Nette!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/9/2011 11:11:00 AM

Congrats on your lovely write being a big winner. BG

Kash Poet

Date: 7/9/2011 10:20:00 AM

Hey I missed this one earlier!Congrats Nette on your big win with this awesome write.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/9/2011 9:04:00 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of John, nette

John Freeman

Date: 7/9/2011 8:50:00 AM

Nette, a pleasure to see your poem near the top of the list. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses

Jack Horne

Date: 7/9/2011 8:48:00 AM

Many congrats, Nette : )

Paul Beadnall

Date: 7/5/2011 7:50:00 AM

Lovely

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/5/2011 1:47:00 AM

wow! so long when i last commented on your poem...so...as what others also expecting from you.....an artistic,wonderful,awesome, " SUPERCALIFRAGILISTICEXPIALIDOCIOUS!" .....Hooooohhhh! so great... ikaw na! ahahaha...^_^jun-jun

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2011 11:19:00 AM

This is wonderful how you did the contest, nette. A sure WINNER for precept haiku!

Dinda Minardi

Date: 7/4/2011 8:04:00 AM

great one, Nette :) hugss

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 7/3/2011 6:36:00 PM

Beautiful! Need I say more?

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 7/3/2011 2:21:00 PM

Oh fabulous nette want to say you are a very sweet friend cause you always take your time to read and send me wonderful congrats and comments so thank you very much friend.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/3/2011 11:18:00 AM

What an inspiring take on the photo, Nette :) "pools of light" is beautiful --wish you the best in John's contest :) hugs

Katherine Stella

Date: 7/3/2011 11:14:00 AM

very spiritual message within write this should do very well in contest dear friend mine was not as good as this for sure also thanks for your warm comments on my works too keep up the wonderful writing enjoyed the read blessings to you and family for a safe 4th

Jancarl Campi

Date: 7/3/2011 5:13:00 AM

Quite an interesting write here. I especially liked the third line. it had a romantic softness to it. May you do well in the contest. Take care and kssp your Muse happy. Jancarl THanks for your kind words on my work.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/2/2011 4:50:00 PM

Reads like a winning one to me..Enjoyed reading this eve..Good luck in the conest..You have a great idea here in this one...Thanks for your kind review of my work..Sara

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 7/2/2011 4:02:00 PM

love that last line nette! great entry, hope it does well...

Don Johnson

Date: 7/2/2011 3:54:00 PM

pride stops love sometimes, the cleansing begins. great poem babe, xo, Don

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2011 2:29:00 PM

NICELY done, Nette.Hope it scores high for you. Luv, Andrea

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/2/2011 1:09:00 PM

This is a Piece of pure Poetry at its best... a fav. for me as Im sure for many on here... Well done my queen of Haiku!!!!....hugs right back at you..luv Michael