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Pondering the Season

To walk along a high mountain rock road Gaze down on a patchwork of green and gold With ribbons like glue on a mosaic vase, A misty fall rain upon your wan face. I know it’s a herald of change of seasons, And I ponder and wonder the reasons, While your eyes on the future enrapt you, One more season, one more, let me love you. We’ve lived and loved and grown old together, Have withstood all of life's stormy weathers, Still conscious are we of the mystery, Of God's love everlasting gift to be. Through one more season, let your dear smile glow. My heart willing it - will make it be so.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/12/2018 2:43:00 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile this poem is beautifully written. Have a nice day my friend.

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/12/2018 6:21:00 PM

So kind of you, Darlene.

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/12/2018 5:39:00 AM

My dear friend. Iam blessed to have found and read this wonderfully beautiful and inspiring sonnet this morn- when such was so very needed by me,, An instant fav for me is this great gem!

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/12/2018 6:21:00 PM

You made my day, Robert! Our cold, freezing drizzly day turned into sunshine.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/8/2018 2:40:00 PM

Romantic work. It takes two willing people to work together through thick and thin to make a marriage work for a lifetime. Sara

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/8/2018 3:20:00 PM

Thank you so much for commenting.

David Smith

Date: 10/24/2018 2:12:00 PM

True poetry, painted just so, with a pen light and breezy. Your colours and tones superb for catching light and essence. Best regards David in NZ

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/8/2018 3:20:00 PM

So appreciated.

Anil Deo

Date: 10/19/2018 12:15:00 PM

A Resounding YES! Love line 8, for all the right reasons. amen & shalom SW. Anil

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/8/2018 3:22:00 PM

I appreciate you, Anil.

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/18/2018 12:08:00 PM

Beautiful work Sunlite, here's hoping to make it so...

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/8/2018 3:23:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie.

Constance La France

Date: 10/15/2018 6:50:00 PM

Sun, oh what a lovely sonnet, well done ~

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/8/2018 3:24:00 PM

Thank you, thank you!

Silent One

Date: 10/14/2018 1:54:00 PM

Such a beautiful sonnet of love and dedication... nice rhymes and flow..

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/8/2018 3:25:00 PM

I so appreciate what you have to say.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/14/2018 1:14:00 PM

Hi Sunlite, such a wonderful sonnet. I enjoyed your write this evening, pondering the season I love. So beautiful the words shared. I love the content. You sing from the heart Sunlite. Have a wonderful Sunday. A fave. Hugs....Mike. XX

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/8/2018 3:28:00 PM

What kind, kind comments! Thank you.

Robertina B.

Date: 10/13/2018 4:10:00 PM

Beautiful sonnet, Sunlite. So heartfelt my friend.. Blessings!!

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/8/2018 3:29:00 PM

Bless you, too, Robertina!

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/13/2018 2:51:00 PM

Very nice. Pleasant to read today. I love the ending too :)

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/8/2018 3:30:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi.