Pond

POND ice skates summer swim where i’m surrounded subdued by dobermans i stand very still, coping “Ripples of fur and water sport“ 4/20/2023 Pyramids3---- 7 Lines Sponsor: Joseph May

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Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 5/2/2023 6:45:00 PM

Congratulations Kim! As a lover of both water and my doberman whose liens have gotten me through some of the most trying times in my life. There Is no greater joy than seeing her dive into a pond and just enjoy the dog life she leads. Fondly A.S.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2023 2:46:00 PM

Aww…thanks for your lovely comment, Anonomus!

Valsa George

Date: 4/29/2023 10:23:00 PM

Back to your poem with congratulations on your first place win dear Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2023 6:31:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/29/2023 11:46:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Kim :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2023 6:31:00 AM

You are always so gracious! I appreciate you, Anne-Lise!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2023 10:14:00 AM

Congrats, Kim, on a well deserved win. I think only you and i did pond. Will have to check and see again!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2023 6:31:00 AM

At least one more! This one brought the memory for me. God bless you, Andrea!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/29/2023 9:54:00 AM

Nice one Kim. Congratulations on your win! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2023 6:30:00 AM

Thank you, Linda!

Joseph May

Date: 4/29/2023 9:01:00 AM

That was scary Kim, Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2023 6:30:00 AM

Thank you, Joe!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/24/2023 10:57:00 AM

Dobermans would subdue me also. Nice work.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2023 5:05:00 PM

Yup! Thank you :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/23/2023 9:10:00 PM

Fun and action and wonderful imagery-this great poem has it all, Kim. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2023 5:05:00 PM

Thank you, sweet lady!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2023 7:53:00 AM

i did pond too. I like how you drew the dogs into it, making it so unique.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/23/2023 9:57:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea! The memory came to the forefront.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/23/2023 3:15:00 AM

- A great one, Kim :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/23/2023 9:56:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/22/2023 6:31:00 PM

Perhaps the dobermans will go for a swim and you can watch them. :) It's better than being surrounded. Good luck in the contest, Kim. I'm sure you'll do well. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Hugs, Brandy

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/22/2023 8:21:00 PM

Thank you, Brandy!

I Am Anaya

Date: 4/22/2023 7:58:00 AM

Many great memories for all seasons, with the exception of the Doberman gang! B0l

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/22/2023 2:00:00 PM

Thanks, Anaya!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/22/2023 1:44:00 AM

A lovely scene, I have never skated in my life.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/22/2023 5:55:00 AM

So glad to hear from you, Victor! Thank you, dear friend!

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/21/2023 10:43:00 PM

Hi Kim, You painted a lovely picture with words. I can just imagine the whole scene. Best wishes in the contest. Have a good evening and weekend:-)Alexis

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/22/2023 5:55:00 AM

Thank you, Alexis!

Yann Rolland

Date: 4/21/2023 7:30:00 PM

you make the pond a delicate and isnpiring place, so sweet poem, thanks

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/21/2023 9:29:00 PM

Thanks, Yann!

Valsa George

Date: 4/20/2023 7:56:00 PM

Pond is a lovely place to be in especially in summer season. Beautiful memories, dear Kim. All the Best

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/21/2023 5:46:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa!

Stephan McBride

Date: 4/20/2023 7:52:00 PM

What great memories to come all season long, my favorite place to be : )

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/21/2023 5:46:00 AM

Thank you, Stephan!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/20/2023 6:48:00 PM

Get those Dobermans some ice skates and water wings! That'll be a 'thang!'

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/21/2023 5:45:00 AM

Love your outlook!

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/20/2023 8:01:00 AM

What a refreshing picture this is, Kim. Dogs are the bomb! LOL

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/20/2023 6:22:00 PM

Thank you, Daniel…lol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/20/2023 7:59:00 AM

This one reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it and I hope your were not really surrounded by Doberman Pinchers. Thanks for sharing and for your visit to my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/20/2023 6:22:00 PM

Thank you, Sara!