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Pond

POND
ice skates
summer swim

where i’m surrounded
subdued by dobermans
i stand very still, coping

“Ripples of fur and water sport“

4/20/2023
Pyramids3---- 7 Lines
Sponsor: Joseph May

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2023

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Anonomus Scorpio Date: 5/2/2023 6:45:00 PM Congratulations Kim! As a lover of both water and my doberman whose liens have gotten me through some of the most trying times in my life. There Is no greater joy than seeing her dive into a pond and just enjoy the dog life she leads. Fondly A.S. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/4/2023 2:46:00 PM Aww…thanks for your lovely comment, Anonomus!

Valsa George Date: 4/29/2023 10:23:00 PM Back to your poem with congratulations on your first place win dear Kim. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/30/2023 6:31:00 AM Thank you, Valsa!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/29/2023 11:46:00 AM - Congratulations on your win, Kim :) - hugs Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/30/2023 6:31:00 AM You are always so gracious! I appreciate you, Anne-Lise!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/29/2023 10:14:00 AM Congrats, Kim, on a well deserved win. I think only you and i did pond. Will have to check and see again! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/30/2023 6:31:00 AM At least one more! This one brought the memory for me. God bless you, Andrea!

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 4/29/2023 9:54:00 AM Nice one Kim. Congratulations on your win! :) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/30/2023 6:30:00 AM Thank you, Linda!

Joseph May Date: 4/29/2023 9:01:00 AM That was scary Kim, Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/30/2023 6:30:00 AM Thank you, Joe!

Caren Krutsinger Date: 4/24/2023 10:57:00 AM Dobermans would subdue me also. Nice work. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/24/2023 5:05:00 PM Yup! Thank you :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 4/23/2023 9:10:00 PM Fun and action and wonderful imagery-this great poem has it all, Kim. :) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/24/2023 5:05:00 PM Thank you, sweet lady!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/23/2023 7:53:00 AM i did pond too. I like how you drew the dogs into it, making it so unique. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/23/2023 9:57:00 AM Thank you, Andrea! The memory came to the forefront.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/23/2023 3:15:00 AM - A great one, Kim :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/23/2023 9:56:00 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Brandy Nicole Date: 4/22/2023 6:31:00 PM Perhaps the dobermans will go for a swim and you can watch them. :) It's better than being surrounded. Good luck in the contest, Kim. I'm sure you'll do well. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Hugs, Brandy Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/22/2023 8:21:00 PM Thank you, Brandy!

I Am Anaya Date: 4/22/2023 7:58:00 AM Many great memories for all seasons, with the exception of the Doberman gang! B0l Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/22/2023 2:00:00 PM Thanks, Anaya!

Victor Buhagiar Date: 4/22/2023 1:44:00 AM A lovely scene, I have never skated in my life. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/22/2023 5:55:00 AM So glad to hear from you, Victor! Thank you, dear friend!

Alexis Y. Date: 4/21/2023 10:43:00 PM Hi Kim, You painted a lovely picture with words. I can just imagine the whole scene. Best wishes in the contest. Have a good evening and weekend:-)Alexis Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/22/2023 5:55:00 AM Thank you, Alexis!

Yann Rolland Date: 4/21/2023 7:30:00 PM you make the pond a delicate and isnpiring place, so sweet poem, thanks Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/21/2023 9:29:00 PM Thanks, Yann!

Valsa George Date: 4/20/2023 7:56:00 PM Pond is a lovely place to be in especially in summer season. Beautiful memories, dear Kim. All the Best Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/21/2023 5:46:00 AM Thank you, Valsa!

Stephan McBride Date: 4/20/2023 7:52:00 PM What great memories to come all season long, my favorite place to be : ) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/21/2023 5:46:00 AM Thank you, Stephan!

Gershon Wolf Date: 4/20/2023 6:48:00 PM Get those Dobermans some ice skates and water wings! That'll be a 'thang!' Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/21/2023 5:45:00 AM Love your outlook!

Daniel Turner Date: 4/20/2023 8:01:00 AM What a refreshing picture this is, Kim. Dogs are the bomb! LOL Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/20/2023 6:22:00 PM Thank you, Daniel…lol

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/20/2023 7:59:00 AM This one reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it and I hope your were not really surrounded by Doberman Pinchers. Thanks for sharing and for your visit to my page. Sara Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/20/2023 6:22:00 PM Thank you, Sara!