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Sue's polka dots dress is so spotty So tiny, it just skims her botty Long legs, what a pair Made all the men stare They ogle and call her a hotty Her outfit one day got soaked wet It shriveled Sue was quite upset Now exposing her tush All the blokes turned to mush Her peepshow pleased them you can bet! Polka Dots Contest Sponsor Edward Ibeh 1/13/19

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2019 3:28:00 PM

Hey, lady, congratulations. Well deserved win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/23/2019 2:49:00 AM

- A lovely win, Jan :) - Congratulations! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 1/22/2019 5:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in high contest, Jan!:) A funny, delightful read!

Jack Horne

Date: 1/22/2019 3:13:00 PM

LOL, love this, Jan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2019 7:14:00 PM

Hi, Jan. Good to see your fun limericks on polka dots! Do you recall the teensy weensy yellow polka dot bikini song? Maybe it was only popular in the states. ARE you doing ok? Haven't heard from you in a while!

Rico Leffanta

Date: 1/16/2019 7:57:00 PM

But certainly not the wives walking along with their husband! You could fill a book with their comments! Good luck! Rico

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 1/15/2019 4:56:00 PM

G'day Jan … I would have given her my coat Jan - yeah right! Lindsay

Brian Davey

Date: 1/15/2019 8:31:00 AM

Cute k title Limerick Jan, good luck in the contest

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/14/2019 11:33:00 PM

I am just a fashion person, loved the dress!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2019 3:36:00 AM

lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll

Date: 1/14/2019 12:05:00 PM

Poor Sue, but so funny. Very original and so well written. I enjoyed it very much. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Jan Allison
Date: 1/14/2019 1:07:00 PM

thanks Warren:-) hugs Jan x

Paul Callus

Date: 1/14/2019 10:12:00 AM

That is one lesson for Sue...always wet a dress before using it the first time round, just in case the material shrinks! Missed the peepshow, but still enjoyed your double Limerick, Jan:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 1/14/2019 10:25:00 AM

lol sounds like you are the voice of experience Paul lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 1/14/2019 7:25:00 AM

Polka dots are hot...Nicely penned Jan..GL in the contest..

Jan Allison
Date: 1/14/2019 10:24:00 AM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/14/2019 2:51:00 AM

Some beautiful sight's in summertime Jan and not just sunrises' lol. Nice one Jan. Good luck. Tom.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/14/2019 4:11:00 AM

ha ha ha Tom:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/13/2019 8:59:00 PM

Ah Jan your imagery is wonderful. It is like reading a picture poem.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/14/2019 4:10:00 AM

Thanks Caren:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 1/13/2019 8:50:00 PM

Haha...Jan, very well written with great imagery. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*

Jan Allison
Date: 1/14/2019 4:10:00 AM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/13/2019 6:02:00 PM

Oh, yeah! Good one, Jan. Best wishes in the contest, Hon. Hugs, carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2019 6:10:00 PM

Thanks Carolyn:-) hugs Jan xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/13/2019 5:28:00 PM

Love it, good job you mentioned Sue, or i might have though it was you...Jan..

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2019 5:45:00 PM

ha ha ha no chance of that Harry but hubby would be happy if I wore short skirts lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/13/2019 4:45:00 PM

Makes me think of 'itty bitty - polka dot bikini' song that was popular a LONG time ago, best of luck in the contest!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2019 4:51:00 PM

I recall the song lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 1/13/2019 4:39:00 PM

Preshrunk's the best ;p Too Cute! xomo

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2019 4:44:00 PM

lol Mo:-) hugs Jan xx

Bette Bavington

Date: 1/13/2019 3:37:00 PM

Sad. Good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2019 3:39:00 PM

Thanks Bette, I doubt the men would think so lol:-) hugs Jan xx

White Wolf

Date: 1/13/2019 3:03:00 PM

I do like the way those legs make an a@$ out of themselves, lol. Very cleverly done, Jan. Best of luck

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2019 3:05:00 PM

lol White Wolf:-) hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/13/2019 3:02:00 PM

Yep, she has revealed her secret instead of "Victoria's"!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2019 3:04:00 PM

lol ML:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/13/2019 2:55:00 PM

- Omg. Jan ... who has allowed you to post this picture of me ... - Love it :))) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/13/2019 2:59:00 PM

- No secrets with me ... my mouth will never stay silent :)))

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2019 2:57:00 PM

shhh Anne-lise it was supposed to be a secret between us that you let me use your picture!!!:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/13/2019 2:50:00 PM

Lol! Jan, I soon as I saw the picture I thought to myself " where' the dress" ! Great fun write. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2019 2:54:00 PM

lol Alexis for some reason I doubt it will place in the contest lol:-) hugs Jan xx