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For lovers twilight means romance, long kisses, and slow dances. For loners it means one more night of mourning love’s lost chances. from "Twilight"--posted September 21, 2016 Date: January 29, 2020 Contest Title: Arbitrium Divisa 7 Sponsor: Gregory Barden

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Date: 1/31/2020 4:14:00 PM
Hello Janice … the story of life in a four line stanza perhaps - thanks Janice - Lindsay
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/31/2020 6:04:00 PM
Thanks so much, Lindsay. Janice
Date: 1/30/2020 8:16:00 AM
Contrast you present here is so real--the same hues of twilight can mean happiness or sadness--you chose a great stanza for this contest, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/30/2020 12:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay! Janice
Date: 1/29/2020 10:59:00 PM
Janice, your quatrain splendidly contrasts lovers and those who've missed love's chances. Good luck in the contest. :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/29/2020 11:09:00 PM
Thanks so much, Evelyn. Janice

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