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POET'S LAMENT

POET’S LAMENT* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Under the night's blank canvas, I sit, a lone figure, my ink-stained fingers poised. I carry the burden of unsaid poetry, ideas that were never expressed, and metaphors that disappeared like echoes. I linger upon the rhymes that unraveled like threads pulled from an old sweater, frayed and forgotten, lost in the seams of time. I am lost in the fabric of language unable to stitch together an ensemble of cohesive words. In dawn’s quiet hours, I wait for inspiration, for the first light to break, to spill over into the edges of my thoughts. I sit, a solitary figure my weary mind suspended beneath the empty canvas of daylight. Under the night's blank canvas, I sit, a lone figure, my ink-stained fingers poised. I carry the burden of unsaid poetry, ideas that were never expressed, and metaphors that disappeared like echoes. I linger upon the rhymes that unraveled like threads pulled from an old sweater, frayed and forgotten, lost in the seams of time. I am lost in the fabric of language unable to stitch together an ensemble of cohesive words. In dawn’s quiet hours, I wait for inspiration, for the first light to break, to spill over into the edges of my thoughts. I sit, a solitary figure my weary mind suspended beneath the empty canvas of daylight *Note: Poem published at Poetry Soup, June 2025 (poetrysoup.com/poem/a_poets_lament_1747589) but later deleted. This is my original poem.
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Baker Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 3:11 PM
The commitment to writing, reading and commenting on poetry is to be admired my Sara. My 4 hours a day seems little compared to the 6-8 hours you dedicate to your craft. Heartfelt poetry shared about your journey. Blessings Sara. for sharing so much of your time with us. You're loving husband, Bill
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August 5, 2025 at 4:34 PM
thanks for your patience with me hubby. I'm probably a bit too driven but I enjoy what I'm doing for now, love you, me
Kauffman Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 11:21 AM
Dearest Sara, I love this poem! It is filled with amazing poetic images and word pictures that perfectly describe the poet in the ambivalent midnight of writer's block! What a wonderful metaphor. Sending you blessings of clarity and peace!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 4:35 PM
awww, thank you dear Sam, for your beautifully positive comments and insight about my metaphor. Color me grateful. Have a blessed evening, Sara
Kendrick Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 5:16 AM
It all came together in a patched quilt or an embroidery piece well stitched. Thanks for sharing this one which speaks of how we all feel from time to time when our muse seems to have gone on vacation and did not ask us to come along. Sara K
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August 5, 2025 at 4:36 PM
I appreciate your indepth and positive comments, Sara K. You're right...always a challenge when our muse goes on vacation...abandoning us is brutal :-) hugs and blessings, Sara
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