POETRY SOUPS SKYWATCHER


Lisa, Lisa, where are you dear poetess Lisa,
Wish we could meet and chat over a pizza,
Our star gazer, dreamy ‘skywatcher’ delight,
To where have you flown in enchanting flight,
I feel it in my bones that you will return soon,
On the crest of a wave or with the new moon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 6/12/2024 5:56:00 PM
Dearest Jennifer, my lovely friend and poetry sis, I thought you were writing about Lisa Ricci as I read your beautiful and tender poem, full of gorgeous imagery that reflects your amazing artistry and caring heart and captures the poetic essence of Lisa with "Our star gazer, dreamy ‘skywatcher’ delight,/To where have you flown in enchanting flight". It seems like the "dreamy skywatcher" has answered your stirring call. I'm so happy to see both of your back :) Warmest wishes, love and hugs flown across the miles to find you dear Jenn.. ~Sue
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Date: 5/26/2024 8:23:00 AM
I wish her well, wherever she is. Hopefully, she will return to the Soup soon. :)
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Date: 5/3/2024 10:42:00 AM
I do hope she is okay and I think sometimes we take a break from writing or sometimes we get uninspired. I know have not written much this past couple of years with mom sick and then passing away left me feeling down and uninspired. love phyl
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Date: 4/28/2024 6:17:00 AM
A nice little piece Jennifer, so well penned with good rhyme and flow too. Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 4/25/2024 12:39:00 PM
I sure hope she is ok and that she gets in touch with you soon. Cute poem for her!
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Date: 4/24/2024 5:07:00 PM
A delightful write for your poet friend Lisa, sometimes silence says more than spoken words can, silence is golden and understanding friends are too… Beryl
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Date: 4/23/2024 11:07:00 AM
Such a clever use of words, Jennifer!! Seems like Lisa was happy to read it. -Smita
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Date: 4/13/2024 9:23:00 AM
A poet’s way of putting out a missing person’s ad. So glad the star gazer was found! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 4/12/2024 4:49:00 AM
Dear beautiful Jennifer. How does one thank you for such a tribute and words. Truly. Thank you. Yes life has been difficult and consuming as I know it is for all. I wish I could devote more time to this art we call poetry. Thank you thank you thank you. I will return to see your work very very soon. Bless you Jennifer. (smile)
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Date: 4/12/2024 4:02:00 AM
What a thoughtful comment on a fellow poetess who has been missing since sometime. I remember her well. Initially she used to comment on my poems and I too reciprocated her kindness with my comments. In our busy existence, occasionally we need a break. I am sure she will return pretty soon. Lovely couplets, dear Jenny. Stay blessed. Love and hugs!
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Date: 4/11/2024 7:16:00 AM
Is this Lisa Ricci? Many poets come and go, some get busy or fed up of the soup.. In regards to your comment on my poem, I am not offended by anything nor have you upset me.. Not sure which comment you were referring too.. All the best my friend..
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Date: 4/11/2024 1:26:00 PM
Yes SO it is Lisa Ricci my friend, it is a shame that people leave I guess sometimes they get too far behind. Thank-you, you are one of my best friends. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Date: 4/9/2024 9:04:00 AM
Hi Jenny, I remember her, it was so kind of you to pen her such a poem. I hope she returns soon. How are you my dear friend from across the pond? I hope you are well-Alexis
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Date: 4/8/2024 1:11:00 AM
I used to know a Lisa but I lost her.
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Date: 4/7/2024 1:55:00 AM
- I don't remember any Lisa ... but, when I look back at "old" poems ... so many who are not here now ... and whom I have forgotten ... several have died and are deeply missed ... lovely written for someone you miss, dear Jenny :) - Have a nice Sunday :) - hugs
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Date: 4/6/2024 9:52:00 PM
This is so beautiful. Love the play on words and the intoxicating imagery! Hoping she is ok!
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Date: 4/6/2024 3:32:00 PM
Hello Jennifer, oh, this lovely. I enjoyed this poem. It will be my fav. Hugs. /Darlene./
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Date: 4/6/2024 12:36:00 PM
So many times a person comes on here and is extremely active for a while and they disappear. I often wonder what has happened to them. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 4/6/2024 12:03:00 PM
This is sweet Jennifer. Pleasant to read . Blessings :)
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Date: 4/6/2024 10:02:00 AM
Jennifer, This poem expresses considerable desire and expectation for the homecoming of the poetess Lisa (who I do not know). Lisa's lyrical temperament, and the hope that she will return soon. Your sentences have a kind and inviting tone, and have a hint of humor in terms like "skywatcher delight."
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