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Poetry Like Brook

I know tomorrow will bring Poetry like new brook Like Ravishankar on string What a lovely look Poetry like new brook Will ripple and jingle on What a lovely look Ushering the golden dawn Will ripple and jingle on Our conversations too Ushering the golden dawn Its colours in the dew Our conversations too Will make our jasmines laugh Its colours in the dew A vibrant photograph Will make our Jasmines laugh Like Ravishankar on string A vibrant photograph I know tomorrow will bring _______________________________ June 27, 2017

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/4/2017 8:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Probir, thank you for entering my contest ~*

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/5/2017 5:37:00 AM

Thank you so much, Eve. I cannot believe you liked it so much. I wrote the Pantoum for your contest in the eleventh hour when I came across the contest-information by chance, as I am not much regular here as I used to be.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/28/2017 3:57:00 AM

Reading your Pantoum poem thought of my flowers and saw them jumping for joy because of your verse's beauty my friend, Probir!

Probir Gupta
Date: 6/28/2017 6:49:00 AM

Just see ... Even the flowers are getting affected (or infected?) ... Take care ... thank you so much ...

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/27/2017 9:00:00 AM

This is a really nice pantoum, Probir. Good luck!

Probir Gupta
Date: 6/27/2017 12:24:00 PM

Thank you, Daniel ...