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July 30,2023

P Words Writing Challenge

Sponsor: Constance La France

FIRST PLACE 

Poetry doesn't always come to me tiptoeing in a veil of imaginatiion, or raging like a turbulent storm!!!  It does emerge when waking up, I gaze at the enchanting vermilion sky at dawn, majestic sun rising in the horizon.  It does when gorgeous sunflowers in my garden bloom flaunting their mesmerizing golden petals,  My heart leaps and flutters like a butterfly enraptured with colours.  It does when a murmuring river croons a tale of passionate wild love,  splashing the pebbles with tender kisses!  But, When I find, on a wintry freezing morning,  a forlorn musician playing violin on my way to the subway,  to earn a few pennies for mere sustenance,  When I find a single mother desperately taking care of a child with a disability...her arms are fatigued, her legs are aching...  When I spot a lonely elderly, eating canned Tuna on a joyful festive day…. he has forgotten how fresh food tastes,  Poetry escapes … words elude me!

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Date: 8/2/2023 11:26:00 AM
Love your theme Mala it was clever and well written and the result for your effort was a resounding Win! Congratulations my Dear...
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/2/2023 3:20:00 PM
Hi Michael, Thank you so very much. My poems are totally the expressions of my feelings, probably that’s the same for many of us - that’s why Free Verse suits my writing - my emotions just flow! Really great to see you back. Best wishes ~ Mala
Date: 7/31/2023 8:18:00 PM
You have beautifully brought out the scenes and situations when poetry flows. Great writing. Congratulations!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/2/2023 3:17:00 PM
Thank you, Christuraj! I can’t write poems unless Nature or some feelings inspire me. Best wishes ~ Mala
Date: 7/31/2023 12:20:00 PM
- Grief paralyzes ... and words become poor ... the sunshine disappears ... and everything becomes colorless ... - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Mala :) - hugs
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/31/2023 1:37:00 PM
Exactly, Anne-Lise. You have described the way I feel when I see someone not fortunate. I have moved to three countries - and witnessed so much poverty and unfairness.
Date: 7/31/2023 10:35:00 AM
Back with congratulations. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write again. Thank You, for your very kind words below. You put a smile on my heart and made my day. Hugs... Have a great day with your win............
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/31/2023 1:39:00 PM
Dear Paula, you are so sweet! Your kindness gets reflected in your poems. Hugs ~ Mala
Date: 7/30/2023 10:38:00 PM
Great contrast presented on two different things, Mala:)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/31/2023 10:06:00 AM
Thank you, Jo. Truly appreciate your visit and kind comment. Yes, many times these contrasts in our world make me ponder! Love ~ Mala
Date: 7/30/2023 12:28:00 PM
Your "Poetry" is a wonderful write. I just put my "P" in. "Good Luck" Have a great day/week.............
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/30/2023 1:41:00 PM
Thanks, Paula. Really appreciate your visit and support. You are a great poet - your poems have inspired me many times. Love ~ Mala
Date: 7/30/2023 11:42:00 AM
Hello Mala, Mala i have seen some of these things to. Love & Friendship, Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/31/2023 9:57:00 AM
Hello Mala, I hope all is well with you. Yes I have seen some of these things people go through. Love & Friensdship, Darlene/
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/30/2023 1:40:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene. I am sure you have seen, and thought about some of the situations people go through. Really appreciate your thoughtful words. Love and friendship ~ Mala
Date: 7/30/2023 8:42:00 AM
What an awesome contrast you painted, Mala, transitioning purposefully from the first stanza to the second. Quite a meaningful write--and a perfect ending line!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/30/2023 10:10:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay! How lovely to receive such inspiring comment, Dear Poet! You have made my day! Life’s joys become many-fold when encouraged by a gifted friend. Warm wishes ~ Mala

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