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P word challenge Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constnace La France

07/29/23

Perfect prose or pantoum’s ... Perhaps these styles are not for me! Poems needn’t be Professionally produced Petty poets pontificate! Personally I prefer Playfully penned poop

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/2/2023 5:14:00 PM

I always enjoy your poems Jan, poopy or not. Let's not always be pretentious in our writing and stay true to ourselves. Laughter is good for the soul!!! :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/1/2023 2:42:00 PM

Well I may be well upwind of the above Efluebce, which is quite effervescent I Had thought you might have the stodgy Variety, however; and whatever it is most Enriching to the soups produce Jan I Am saying this all deadpan.!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/1/2023 3:44:00 AM

LOL. Love it. God bless you with more and more inspirations... Love, Gina

Valsa George

Date: 7/31/2023 9:43:00 PM

You have played with the word 'P' and poetry too..... :) Congratulations Jan on your first place win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/31/2023 12:05:00 PM

- P... for Poetry hugs and congratulations, Jan :) -

Jan Allison
Date: 7/31/2023 12:11:00 PM

P for poop more like but I do like to err take the P out of my poetry skills lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/31/2023 10:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A creative/fun write. Great Ending... Have a great day.............

Jan Allison
Date: 7/31/2023 12:11:00 PM

thanks so much Paula :-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/31/2023 5:04:00 AM

- P ... for PooP ... Playfully ... Pleiades ... Poem ... Pearly ... Perfect, Jan :) - hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 7/31/2023 12:10:00 PM

I had lots of P words to think of lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 7/30/2023 2:10:00 AM

Lol Jan. I’m so with you and Oscar. We all express ourselves in different ways. I understand there needs to be certain rules to keep us in check but what the heck, poop all you like.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/30/2023 9:48:00 AM

I will never stop pooping here or on my throne lol:-) hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/29/2023 10:31:00 PM

Jan... you get me every time!!! Didn't expect that ending but what genius! ;) hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 7/30/2023 9:48:00 AM

lol thanks Eileen, I will never stray from my love of humour and if its poop fine - at least I write about it whilst some others ... i will leave you to work that one out lol:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 7/29/2023 4:01:00 PM

A LOAD OF PEAS WITH THIS POOP

Jan Allison
Date: 7/29/2023 4:05:00 PM

well i guess i am just taking the P here john lol:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/29/2023 2:37:00 PM

jan, you have made your P point perfectly! best of luck in the contest...

Jan Allison
Date: 7/29/2023 4:05:00 PM

thanks sweet friend, your poems and comments always make my day:-) hugs jan xx

J. Summers

Date: 7/29/2023 2:11:00 PM

With all the crap going on in the world today I can always use a chuckle. Thanks. John

Jan Allison
Date: 7/29/2023 4:05:00 PM

thanks for dropping by John xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/29/2023 1:58:00 PM

LOVE this, Jan! Janice

Jan Allison
Date: 7/29/2023 2:06:00 PM

I just get fed up of snide comments about bawdy/poopy poetry. I will never stop lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 7/29/2023 12:06:00 PM

I'm loving Constance's alphabetical opportunities to choose any word we prefer to write about, including poop! It's preferable to the pompous pontificating with complaint that some continually harp about. It's my day of handing out "Bravos" to those who deserve them today. Case in point... You and Craig's blog.

Lin Lane
Date: 7/29/2023 2:09:00 PM

Geeze, Jan. You have to get your toilet humor everywhere! Flushed cheeks on your face and your butt? lol

Jan Allison
Date: 7/29/2023 12:19:00 PM

Thanks Lin that is an honour indeed:-) I am flushed with success:-) hugs Jan xx

Judy Ball

Date: 7/29/2023 11:16:00 AM

Too cute Jan. This one made me smile. I too prefer a poem that says something or perhaps tickles my funny bone. Love it. God Bless, JB

Jan Allison
Date: 7/29/2023 11:22:00 AM

Some poetry leaves me cold, some I simply don't understand and I think only the writer does lo, but each to their own, but i know one thing for sure I will never again be put down for writing poopy/ funny/ bawdy poems. hugs jan xx