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P word challenge Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constnace La France

07/29/23

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Perfect prose or pantoum’s ...
Perhaps these styles are not for me!
Poems needn’t be
Professionally produced
Petty poets pontificate!
Personally I prefer
Playfully penned poop

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Linda Alice Fowler

August 2, 2023 at 5:14 PM

I always enjoy your poems Jan, poopy or not. Let's not always be pretentious in our writing and stay true to ourselves. Laughter is good for the soul!!! :)

Joe Maverick

August 1, 2023 at 2:42 PM

Well I may be well upwind of the above Efluebce, which is quite effervescent I Had thought you might have the stodgy Variety, however; and whatever it is most Enriching to the soups produce Jan I Am saying this all deadpan.!

Regina Mcintosh

August 1, 2023 at 3:44 AM

LOL. Love it. God bless you with more and more inspirations... Love, Gina

Valsa George

July 31, 2023 at 9:43 PM

You have played with the word 'P' and poetry too..... :) Congratulations Jan on your first place win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 31, 2023 at 12:05 PM

- P... for Poetry hugs and congratulations, Jan :) -

Jan Allison

July 31, 2023 at 12:11 PM

P for poop more like but I do like to err take the P out of my poetry skills lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith

July 31, 2023 at 10:27 AM

Congratulations on your win. A creative/fun write. Great Ending... Have a great day.............

Jan Allison

July 31, 2023 at 12:11 PM

thanks so much Paula :-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 31, 2023 at 5:04 AM

- P ... for PooP ... Playfully ... Pleiades ... Poem ... Pearly ... Perfect, Jan :) - hugs

Jan Allison

July 31, 2023 at 12:10 PM

I had lots of P words to think of lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

July 30, 2023 at 2:10 AM

Lol Jan. I’m so with you and Oscar. We all express ourselves in different ways. I understand there needs to be certain rules to keep us in check but what the heck, poop all you like.

Jan Allison

July 30, 2023 at 9:48 AM

I will never stop pooping here or on my throne lol:-) hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian

July 29, 2023 at 10:31 PM

Jan... you get me every time!!! Didn't expect that ending but what genius! ;) hugs

Jan Allison

July 30, 2023 at 9:48 AM

lol thanks Eileen, I will never stray from my love of humour and if its poop fine - at least I write about it whilst some others ... i will leave you to work that one out lol:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

July 29, 2023 at 4:01 PM

A LOAD OF PEAS WITH THIS POOP

Jan Allison

July 29, 2023 at 4:05 PM

well i guess i am just taking the P here john lol:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

July 29, 2023 at 2:37 PM

jan, you have made your P point perfectly! best of luck in the contest...

Jan Allison

July 29, 2023 at 4:05 PM

thanks sweet friend, your poems and comments always make my day:-) hugs jan xx

J. Summers

July 29, 2023 at 2:11 PM

With all the crap going on in the world today I can always use a chuckle. Thanks. John

Jan Allison

July 29, 2023 at 4:05 PM

thanks for dropping by John xx

Janice Canerdy

July 29, 2023 at 1:58 PM

LOVE this, Jan! Janice

Jan Allison

July 29, 2023 at 2:06 PM

I just get fed up of snide comments about bawdy/poopy poetry. I will never stop lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane

July 29, 2023 at 12:06 PM

I'm loving Constance's alphabetical opportunities to choose any word we prefer to write about, including poop! It's preferable to the pompous pontificating with complaint that some continually harp about. It's my day of handing out "Bravos" to those who deserve them today. Case in point... You and Craig's blog.

Lin Lane

July 29, 2023 at 2:09 PM

Geeze, Jan. You have to get your toilet humor everywhere! Flushed cheeks on your face and your butt? lol

Jan Allison

July 29, 2023 at 12:19 PM

Thanks Lin that is an honour indeed:-) I am flushed with success:-) hugs Jan xx

Judy Ball

July 29, 2023 at 11:16 AM

Too cute Jan. This one made me smile. I too prefer a poem that says something or perhaps tickles my funny bone. Love it. God Bless, JB

Jan Allison

July 29, 2023 at 11:22 AM

Some poetry leaves me cold, some I simply don't understand and I think only the writer does lo, but each to their own, but i know one thing for sure I will never again be put down for writing poopy/ funny/ bawdy poems. hugs jan xx

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