Jan Allison Poet Free verse

Poetic Love -Creative Layout

We have never met across the oceans blue
I know that I am the one you write about
Your romantic words are sheer perfection  
I drink in every syllable
My heart  s    k          p       s            a        beat

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How can I tell you            
I’m
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In love with you


I can no longer control my emotions;
If you could look at my heart you would see it is 
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Just word from you and I will be by your side….

WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU ARE HAPPILY MARRIED AND THEY ARE WRITTEN ABOUT YOUR WIFE!


I simply don’t understand …


Jan Allison
10~24~15

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Bill Lindsay October 28, 2015 at 10:55 AM Wonderfully done, Jan ... proud to be on the same page as you x Jan Allison October 28, 2015 at 11:03 AM Aww Bill the feeling is mutual I read some stunning creative poems:-) hugs jan xx

Skat A October 27, 2015 at 9:37 PM Jan, Wonderful win. SKAT Jan Allison October 28, 2015 at 7:42 AM Thanks Skat:-) hugs jan xx

CayCay Godwin October 26, 2015 at 8:45 PM I see from the comments below that you won! Congrats - this is creative and clever. I enjoyed it LOTS ... CayCay Jan Allison October 27, 2015 at 2:21 AM Yes I got a first - was delighted:-) hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie October 26, 2015 at 7:43 PM Very creative Jan and the story can either make us wince or smile - congrats - Lindsay Jan Allison October 27, 2015 at 2:21 AM Exactly Lindsay and you see it happening on here:-( hugs jan xx

Arlene Smith October 26, 2015 at 10:01 AM Been there done that lol!... Congrats on your great win, sweetness!... Jan Allison October 26, 2015 at 12:49 PM Thanks Arlene:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong October 26, 2015 at 8:25 AM This is sweet Jan and you have layed it out so creatively. Congratulations on your wonderful first place win! I am happy to be in your talented company. Cheers, Connie Jan Allison October 26, 2015 at 8:56 AM Thanks so much Connie i saw some lovely creative entries:-) hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 26, 2015 at 4:28 AM Jan, emotive with a nice twist and creative in the way you arrange the letters.. =`)~Olive Eloisa Jan Allison October 26, 2015 at 8:56 AM Thanks Olive:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 26, 2015 at 1:04 AM Congrats on superb win Jan with this wonderful creative layout and poetry! Jan Allison October 26, 2015 at 2:08 AM Thanks Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx

Greg Hoffman October 25, 2015 at 7:38 PM I knew my sinking feeling was correct, congrats on your win Jan Allison October 26, 2015 at 2:08 AM You were correct - thanks Greg:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight October 25, 2015 at 7:10 PM Excellent creative layout with a nice twist in your poem, Jan! Congratulations on your fine well-deserved win! Hugs, Sandra Jan Allison October 26, 2015 at 2:07 AM Thanks Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper October 25, 2015 at 6:33 PM Congratulations on you wonderful win, I love the poem!!!!! hugs eve Jan Allison October 25, 2015 at 6:37 PM Thanks so much Eve I have seen some wonderful creative poems and really enjoyed reading the winners:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich October 25, 2015 at 5:51 PM way to GO, this one is super well deserved. BIG congrats to you. Jan Allison October 25, 2015 at 5:54 PM Thanks Andrea I had fun with this contest:-) hugs jan xx

James Inman October 25, 2015 at 5:02 PM Ha! Jan, I love it. So serious and sweet until the last lines. Jan Allison October 25, 2015 at 5:03 PM Thanks James i had fun with this one:-) hugs Jan xx

Dan Cwiak October 25, 2015 at 3:15 PM I love the last lines about the wife, Jan. You must think "outside the box" all the time.lol Kudos on this beauty! Jan Allison October 25, 2015 at 3:18 PM I never know what my muse will come out with Dan - having never written a poem since I was at school I think I'm making up for lost time in the last 20 months lol:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y. October 25, 2015 at 1:21 PM Jan, congratulations on your 1st place win:-)Alexis Jan Allison October 25, 2015 at 2:40 PM Many thanks:-) Hugs jan xx:-)

Paul Callus October 25, 2015 at 12:17 PM Oh dear!! jumping to conclusions!! How often we read the signs wrong!! Very witty and creative, Jan. Congratulations on being placed first:) Hugs // paul Jan Allison October 25, 2015 at 12:22 PM Sadly sometimes we do Paul! :-) hugs Jan xx

Donna Jones October 24, 2015 at 10:09 PM Aah clever!...wonderful presentation..good luck... Jan Allison October 25, 2015 at 7:44 AM Thanks Donna I enjoyed the challenge - have seen some lovely poems I think the sponsor will have fun judging this contest:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y. October 24, 2015 at 3:22 PM Jan, this is such a clever and creative write! I enjoyed the twist at the end. You should place well in the contest. Good luck in contest:-) Alexis 7 Jan Allison October 24, 2015 at 3:30 PM Thanks Alexis - just a bit of creative fun:-) hugs Jan xx

Greg Hoffman October 24, 2015 at 2:57 PM Good luck in the contest, I have a S I N K I N G feeling you have a winner here. Jan Allison October 24, 2015 at 3:29 PM I don't think you can format the comments at all - it is hard enough to do it in the poems lol:-) hugs Jan xx Greg Hoffman October 24, 2015 at 3:14 PM Lol I typed out sinking diagonally to TRY and be creative but it just capitalized it. Can't figure it out Jan Allison October 24, 2015 at 2:59 PM LOL Greg - I will wait and see - a win is a bonus but as long as I get reads and comments that is the most important thing:-) Hugs jan xx

Eric Boddie October 24, 2015 at 10:49 AM and that is why I don't do married women....because it will forever leave me slipping....and slipping is what I refuse to do....all because there are so many sexy single women like you....I Love this jan....;) Eric Boddie October 24, 2015 at 11:20 AM I mean single women who think like you....single women with Beautiful hearts....;) Jan Allison October 24, 2015 at 11:10 AM ha ha ha well I've never hidden the fact I'm married ... so the final comment definitely doesn't relate to me :-) hugs jan xx

Caryl Muzzey October 24, 2015 at 10:38 AM Very creative indeed Jan, loved it. Best to you in the contest.~ Caryl Jan Allison October 24, 2015 at 10:49 AM Thanks Caryl:-) I have seen some lovely 'creations' :-) hugs jan xx

Paige Clinton October 24, 2015 at 10:23 AM Wow! I really enjoyed it! I hope you get one of the top places! It was amazing! Wishing you the best of luck!-Paige P.S: I just realized we entered the same contest! That's amazing! Mine is called Dear Anna, a really old one I wrote! I hope you like it! :) :) :) Jan Allison October 24, 2015 at 10:27 AM Will drop by and read it Paige:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith October 24, 2015 at 9:13 AM Wonderful Jan....sounds like the theme of the day. Jan Allison October 24, 2015 at 9:56 AM Thanks Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich October 24, 2015 at 8:47 AM hahahaha. LOVE the creativity!!! Jan Allison October 24, 2015 at 8:48 AM Thought out of the box lol :-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane October 24, 2015 at 8:40 AM Jan ~ I don't know whether to laugh or cry over this one. Your confession of love is so sweet, then you yelled at him for finding out he has a wife! Did he mislead you? In either case...It's a very emotional write. Lin Lane October 24, 2015 at 8:53 AM 25 years...that's something to celebrate! Jan Allison October 24, 2015 at 8:45 AM ha ha total fiction my friend I was just being ultra creative lol - I will be celebrating my silver anniversary next June ! Hugs Jan xx

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