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Poetic License Pure Frustration If I could not Kiss you with my sonnets Explain you symbolically Or say “I love you” In metaphorical ambiguities Like Braille, I’ve felt tipped over you With my flair For words My paper is kodachrome canvas And in a split second thought I’ve blown up a verbose Enlargement of your essence Blessed am I Above all lonely women in love I can illuminate with alliteration And say Marvelous, money hungry, miserly, macho man You’re missing I can, at anytime Anyplace Make out in meters And when it comes to it Write down, whatever Fast, faster, fastest, forever And sleep. 2/20/16 This was my first poem on PS. It was written in 1976 and revised prior to submission. I was young, in love and wrote free verse much more then but now I feel the need to rhyme everything in a sense of completeness.

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Date: 10/4/2019 11:05:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this one again.
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Date: 9/6/2017 11:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest, Janis! Kiss you with my sonnets...say "I Love You" in metaphorical ambiguities (that's what us poets do!)
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Date: 8/26/2017 4:48:00 PM
good write, congrats on your win :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 8/26/2017 5:15:00 PM
Debbie, thanks for stopping by. I don't know where you found this one but its been out there a while. Have a blessed one. Janis.
Date: 2/14/2017 12:17:00 PM
Terrific write Janis, congratulations...
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Janis Thompson
Date: 2/14/2017 1:12:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie.
Date: 2/13/2017 11:53:00 PM
I like the way you wrote this, poetic license is useful, isn't it? Congratulations on your top spot, Janis:)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 2/14/2017 1:13:00 PM
Thanks, Jo.
Date: 2/13/2017 5:11:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Janis
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Janis Thompson
Date: 2/14/2017 1:15:00 PM
Thanks, Joseph.
Date: 2/13/2017 12:28:00 PM
Many congratulations Janice:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janis Thompson
Date: 2/13/2017 3:57:00 PM
Thanks, Jan.
Date: 2/13/2017 10:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your top placement! I enjoyed this one.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 2/13/2017 3:58:00 PM
Thanks, Richard.
Date: 2/13/2017 10:20:00 AM
Just beautiful for your first post as I read below...Touched me deeply and the rhythm was outstanding...my kind of poetry lovely lady :) thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Janis Thompson
Date: 2/13/2017 4:03:00 PM
Thanks for thinking so highly of my poem. As you can see since last Feb. it has been around a bit and can now rest. Great contest. Blessings to you, Janis.
Date: 5/30/2016 11:56:00 AM
Janis, nice to read you first post, a late Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT*
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Janis Thompson
Date: 5/30/2016 3:41:00 PM
Yes, I think this post was in February but I have not placed any entry in your contest...

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