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Poetic -- Hodgepodge

POETIC Hodgepodge The early morning sunshine peeks Over the majestic mountain peaks The mother louse , would quietly knit A butterfly sweater for her newborn nit Twenty pounds of dough has been kneaded For eighty-one cheery pies the VFW needed On a beautiful , brilliant, Blue Moon night A fair maiden :Rescued by Sir Valiant knight My Heartbeats life again : it has found someone New My Dearest Barbeeg, Barbara Jean : I LOVE YOU “ I Thought YOU Knew “ In Dedication to Barbara Jean Gorelick

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/15/2012 11:03:00 PM

Sweet as a cherry pie indeed! These are very entertaining verses. Always, Laura

Sandra Hudson

Date: 5/14/2009 2:42:00 PM

All ready? Alright! Now all together. Altogether already, All right now! Anyone listening? Any one of you? Anyway, sing any way you choose Maybe we should wait. This may be out last chance. This was fun, I like hodgepodge, yours was better:)-AA

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/23/2009 4:55:00 PM

sweet. i don't know if this is a response of an invitation tribute. but i do know barbra is a friend of mine and i here from her often and value her oppinion. so what ever you say about her go double for me. JHL

Brian Anderson

Date: 4/16/2009 10:11:00 PM

that is a wonderful poem for a wonderful writer. well done

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/16/2009 1:07:00 AM

Beautiful dedication, you are the king of hodgepodge, I must say...Raul

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/15/2009 1:16:00 PM

wonderful tribute-and its great you had the courage to be so sinciere,feelings,its all about heart feelings-wonderfully penned;-)

Laurie Ginn

Date: 4/15/2009 6:27:00 AM

What a very special write for your special someone, fun write as usual HG.

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/15/2009 5:47:00 AM

Oh how absolutely beautiful! Two incredibly special people with a rare beauty of spirit. Your poem is a heartfelt work of art, and the person this is dedicated to is so well deserving and more. An amazing way to start my day. Love, Shar

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/14/2009 6:47:00 PM

HG, I'm speechless. I won't ever forget this ..ever. I'll write more when i get my wits back..I Do KNOW..BG

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire
Date: 8/11/2016 11:17:00 PM

Dear Barbara, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit Do YOU (REALLY) KNOW?? I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOURS...Harry

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/14/2009 6:34:00 PM

Barbara is one of the sweetest and most talented writers, HG. What a lovely image I have of you sweeping her off her feet as Sir Valient! Wonderful tribute! Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/14/2009 6:20:00 PM

What a lovely dedication!! She will adore this, I'm sure!! ~