Poet, No Longer Will I Sup At Your Banquet

My eyes were sorely struck when once they perceived
verity in your insightful words. Oh, how they grieved
when you chose to kneel low enough to kiss the ring
of a cunning being, whose unmerited praises you sing

My ignorance would have been a cliched state of bliss
if I'd not stumbled into great depth of a poetic abyss
'Twas with bitter regret that I unveiled your charade
No longer do I doubt the crux of a contrived crusade

With prudence and humble nature, you oft' disclosed
but a false facade was revealed and hubris exposed
As a poet you declared compassion and a meek heart
but sold your feeble soul for the nod of a counterpart

Poet, I hungrily supped at the banquet of your lines
but a person's integrity is one that genuinely defines
human value. From reading you, I refrain and eschew
Aware of your pretexts, I know what motivates you


*You may think I only post something on PS when I have a gripe, and I have when I've felt it was warranted. It's your right to believe what you will. My recent posts prove otherwise, but after very recently reading something that touched my heart in a sadly profound way, I chose to write about it instead of trying to forget that I saw the words. Writing has always been a means of comfort, solace and closure.  This write serves as a dissolution for me.

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Date: 12/7/2019 8:18:00 AM
My friend, you poetry always awes me. Its truth of heart and purpose is never trivial. Your detractors are sad cases in my opinion. As your poetry is always that of a kind and very talented poetess! I guess live and learn applies with this poem. Sorry that you were mistreated. A fav, and a great message was delivered, methinks. God bless..
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/7/2019 8:30:00 AM
Thank you for your concern, Robert. However I was not mistreated or involved in any way. What I observed was the unbecoming groveling of a poet that broke my last thread of respect. Til later, dear man.
Date: 12/6/2019 4:38:00 AM
Lin, glad to see you back on PS. Sorry the trolls are back at it. I hope you do enter some of my future contests, I judge blindly and fair. I don't understand some people on here! Hope all the negativity goes away, you wrote a well penned powerful poem!
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/6/2019 10:46:00 AM
Thank you for both the sentiments and the invitation, Tania. To try and understand the reasons people do what they do would boggle my mind.
Date: 12/4/2019 4:24:00 PM
I'm so saddened to hear of another incident on this site, thankfully I don't socialize on this site. Writing is cathartic, and it is good to write out the emotions. Glad you feel better now after this write. Please stay! I've missed your writing, especially in my contests!
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Date: 12/4/2019 4:44:00 PM
I shouldn't have been surprised by the happening, even after giving fair warning. It's a bygone that I've now brushed aside. John, your contest that I entered in September was the only one I've entered in more than a year. I appreciate you for asking me to stay, and will promise to think about it. As ever, your thoughts are a valuable gift.
Date: 12/3/2019 1:45:00 AM
Bravo for speaking out Lin, so sorry you have had this happen but we do know their are fake folk our their and snakes in sheep clothing. Not been active been ill and my muse has gone:-( hugs Jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/3/2019 3:42:00 AM
Hmmm A missing muse is not amusing. When she shows up, tell her she's been replaced! You've been sick, too? Oh my. I appreciate your comment even more now, so take care of yourself.
Date: 12/2/2019 2:28:00 PM
Sometimes people are not quite what we thought they were, wolves in sheep's clothing We see them in everyday life and even on here . Well written Lin and nice to see you. Tom.
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/2/2019 4:25:00 PM
So true, Tom. White is often tarnished when truth unfolds. Thanks for the kind thought of seeing me on site, Tom.
Date: 12/2/2019 1:36:00 PM
Many have ulterior motives Lin, cut your losses and move on.
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Date: 12/2/2019 1:42:00 PM
Done and done, Tim. As I now see it...nothing was lost. Thanks for your input.
Date: 12/2/2019 12:49:00 PM
Hello Lin, I was shocked when I read this poem. Why would a poet do this thing to you? No wonder you upset. With good reason. On this site I feel like we are family. yes that is how i feel. We should be kind to one another. Huge because i feel you need one. Darlene
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/4/2019 9:25:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/3/2019 5:37:00 PM
Hello Lin , I am proud of you. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/2/2019 1:23:00 PM
Hi Darlene. Thank you for reading and leaving your remarks. It's not so much what this person has done to me. My feelings are superficial, and have been adjusted, but what's more important is the loss of his/her integrity. I was briefly upset, but will give no more thought to the one I thought was legitimate.
Date: 12/2/2019 12:18:00 PM
Lin, your poem is deep and emotional. It made me sad to think that a poet could be so unkind. I always think that poets have beautiful souls but not so, for there have been times when I have also felt the dagger of words. Well done !
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Date: 12/2/2019 1:20:00 PM
There is no blood from the wound, and it'll heal quickly now that I've put my thoughts into words. Insincere people should give no pause for sorrow. Thanks for responding, Constance.
Date: 12/2/2019 10:49:00 AM
I am kind of at a loss on the theme of this though I do know if it comes from your pen, the meaning is deep and truthful to your feelings. I am not one who thinks you only write to gripe, I have been one of your biggest fans for a long time and cherish anything you write. But I do know it is necessary to bring things to light via poetry and how it feels when you do. I have written my share of poems like this when something gives me great cause to. Nicely done my friend.
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Date: 12/2/2019 10:58:00 AM
Dear Chris, you and I have mutual admiration and respect for each other. This write was cathartic, and whether or not the person to whom it is aimed realizes it, I felt the need to release my thoughts. I sighed deeply after posting it. Thank you for the many gracious comments you've always left in my wake. Each one is valued and appreciated. I also gracefully acknowledge your compliments and cherish them as though they were gifts of flowers.
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