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This head I have on isn't a poet I just wrote about dancing with the dog Sweet, but more me and the dog conversation when we reminiscence on the day later A spider just disappeared from view outside There are balloons where I am The banner reflected in the mirror isn't back to front but the writing on the balloon reflected is - both words say 'birthday' - I can't figure out why... just figured it out - the balloon is facing the mirror, the banner is in front of the mirror. That was exciting for 3 seconds... It's not my birthday but I did blow up some of the balloons I wonder where poets go when they leave their host behind? Poetically speaking I hear no din My brain quite quiet like no one is in Breathing quite settled, no concern there Observations note suggestion of 1000 yard stare Earlier I danced and sang with my pet Dreamt about cake I didn't bother to get Drank camomile tea, put on the hoody of doom Hoody of doom backwards is mood fo ydooh The mood fo ydooh is something to explore I didn't used to wear hoodys before But I put down the poem and ate a crisp Therefore I'll declare this mood very low risk

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Date: 9/14/2023 12:34:00 PM
Interesting, lol...
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Date: 9/14/2023 1:26:00 PM
Thanks Paige - I was sick of sad poems

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