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The bard had just penned a ballad profound and stroking his beard, this clumsy word-hound just spilled his last beer on pages unbound. A marvelous monorhyme sits uncrowned. Deluged under streams of thoughts that still hound, I venture to guess the piece has just drowned from rainclouds of doubt with thunderous sound from faraway lightning seeking a ground, Now mopping up foam, he waits to impound damp shadowy reservoirs which redound to poetic skill reserved and renowned, concealed in debris, its burial mound. Like nebulous chords which cannot be found his poem is lost with drinks he just downed. Can there be a way to use ultrasound to track fickle brainstorms flitting around? written April 5, 2012, revised August 17, 2021 Contest: Your Best Monorhyme, Host: William Kekaula

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Date: 8/20/2021 9:28:00 PM
Hammered and scattered, the hour's not for words be got, time leisure, mind eager. In-depth paired parody well-crafted. Blessings, Reason, for sharing your resourceful talents my friend, Aloha!
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Date: 8/21/2021 11:55:00 AM
thanks, William, I appreciate your comment and of course the placement in your contest. As far as monorhyme of any length, it's all in the choice of words. Have a great day in poetry.
Date: 4/19/2012 5:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Susan's "Blame It on the Rain" contest Reason. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/19/2012 1:16:00 AM
Nice piece,Poteet. Congrats on your win...
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Date: 4/18/2012 10:27:00 AM
I've had them disappear right in front of mye eyes never to be seen again. Great writing. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/18/2012 10:20:00 AM
Reason congrats on your win..David
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Date: 4/18/2012 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your #7 win in my contest!
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 8/17/2021 7:14:00 AM
Placement appreciated, commendations are welcome. Thank you, Susan.
Date: 4/5/2012 7:41:00 PM
this is pretty cool.. good write
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