Poem Lost

The bard had just penned a ballad profound
and stroking his beard, this clumsy word-hound
just spilled his last beer on pages unbound.
A marvelous monorhyme sits uncrowned. 

Deluged under streams of thoughts that still hound,
I venture to guess the piece has just drowned
from rainclouds of doubt with thunderous sound
from faraway lightning seeking a ground,

Now mopping up foam, he waits to impound
damp shadowy reservoirs which redound
to poetic skill reserved and renowned,
concealed in debris, its burial mound.

Like nebulous chords which cannot be found
his poem is lost with drinks he just downed.
Can there be a way to use ultrasound
to track fickle brainstorms flitting around?

written April 5, 2012, revised August 17, 2021

Contest: Your Best Monorhyme, Host: William Kekaula
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 9:28 PM
Hammered and scattered, the hour's not for words be got, time leisure, mind eager. In-depth paired parody well-crafted. Blessings, Reason, for sharing your resourceful talents my friend, Aloha!
Poteet Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 11:55 AM
thanks, William, I appreciate your comment and of course the placement in your contest. As far as monorhyme of any length, it's all in the choice of words. Have a great day in poetry.
Brown Avatar
April 19, 2012 at 5:50 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Susan's "Blame It on the Rain" contest Reason. Love, Carol
Arowolo Avatar
April 19, 2012 at 1:16 AM
Nice piece,Poteet. Congrats on your win...
Johnson Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 10:27 AM
I've had them disappear right in front of mye eyes never to be seen again. Great writing. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Williams Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 10:20 AM
Reason congrats on your win..David
Susan Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 8:52 AM
Congratulations on your #7 win in my contest!
Poteet Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 7:14 AM
Placement appreciated, commendations are welcome. Thank you, Susan.
May Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 7:41 PM
this is pretty cool.. good write
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