Pocketful of Hardened Suns

When I think of what to write
often the ocean comes to mind
Endless sea of pretty blue
and stretched out horizon lines,
impossibly flat

Yet when I actually arrive
it isn't the sea that my eyes
take a liking too
Rather it's just below the waves
my mind does go...

...to the little trinkets
beside my toes

Fossils of sea creatures,
alive one - and now, even in death -
you can see the beauty of their features
Seashells of every shape and hue

(even if they're familiar,
somehow they're always new)

Some are inky black or cobalt blue,
creamy whites and nutty browns

(pretty oranges, too!)

Some are hefty like a throwing stone,
others quite miniscule,
blending in with the sand
Some are fragile -breaking easier
than the waves-
others are like a hardened sunrise
Their well defined rays,
my fingers always finds themselves,
unbidden as an eye-blink

(as unthinking as a smile)

I like the clanky sound they make
when lightly shook in a mason jar
I shake them like dice in cupped hands

(loaded, in my case...
I don't gamble with a good time)

Yeah, when it comes to the beach
I'm like a kid at a candy store
My treats aren't in bins,
but glisten on the sandy shore
I scoop them in my hands,
still wet with the sea
Stick them in my pockets,
if the case need be

(and you know it always does
if I'm being honest)

Where it gets me, I don't know,
but, please,
just one more keepsake!

(this simple joy I try to harness)

I pick up a second then a third
while still admiring the first
A dozen or two, is only of mild concern
(a wagon-full is even worse)

Yes

It is an obsession through and through

I could be just as happy with one
as with a thousand

(maybe happiness isn't something
you can attach a number too)

And I don't know why I do it,
treasure to me (but not for thee)
And even rarity isn't an excuse
You can pick them up by the shovel,
they aren't difficult to find
You can count a hundred alone
within arms reach

(maybe joy doesn't have to be rare,
but can be as common as clouds...
maybe it's not something "out there",
but somewhere near,
even to the ground)

Near as an object
lying beside your feet
Near as a thought that came to you...

...while walking on the beach
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Smith Avatar
June 14, 2024 at 12:49 AM
Great poem with great explanation of why something attracts us to it. Lovely poem full of descriptive phrases. Hope you are still around and able at some stage to toss a few more poems the way of the soup. Regards David in NZ. Now 5 years cancer free, a five year old grandson and identical twin boys due to our other daughter, the eldest. Best regards David in NZ
Zahid Avatar
June 21, 2022 at 7:54 AM
This is lovely Timothy... You have crafted this poem so well... Great Poem and smooth rhymes.. Loved it... Blessings
Theraven Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 10:25 PM
Timothy, Transcendental poetry; time without a place. Find it in yours just the same. -Richard
Tacito Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 3:28 PM
First off, STRIKING title! Secondly, what a trip this piece took me on. The feelings were real for me in the closing. Damn, damn fine work!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 6:20 AM
I so enjoyed reading this one again. ;0)
Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 3:50 PM
haha. That is REALLY an obsession if it is as exciting as the actual candy in a candy store. Hey, how are you? Wish you would come here more.
Breidenthal Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 10:42 AM
As a fellow seashell collector this piece spoke to me, Timothy! Cool to see you posting on the soup still! "As unthinking as a smile" love that! Always, Laura
Manassian Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 7:19 AM
Absolutely enchanting. I was able to enjoy this walk along with you, dear. So many truths packed in your lines. Gives me food for thought...what an ending.
Delaney Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 3:28 AM
‘Near as an object lying beside your feet Near as a thought that came to you...’ Yes Timothy you have captured the spirit of joy in these delightful lines. You act like me on the beach. lol SuZ
Smith Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 11:54 PM
I am glad your talent is below the clouds but not under the sand. Keep them coming. Particularly liked this one. Enjoy your weekend David in NZ
Lamoureux Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 6:19 AM
Reading this brought me joy. I think you are right, we chase after what is rare when in fact the true things of value are the simple pleasures that surround us. Sadly many are to busy chasing the rare to know it. Outstanding writing my friend.
Dillard Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 9:07 PM
Tim, You made me want to vacation on the beach. We go every year and take the grandchildren. I fish a little, but mostly we search the shore for the same little treasures as you. We could walk past one another and never know because we’re focused on the sand beneath our feet. Happy writing my friend.
Rigoler Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 2:31 PM
A very enjoyable write, one I can relate to in an oblique way: When I stroll the local beachs it's not for shells but for lost coins and jewelry (wedding rings in particular, even water sogged empty wallets, bracelets, etc. Admittedly I do much better financially in parking lots findinf pennies, nickels, dimes and quarters, and an occasion $20 bill! BTW, great to see you writing again. Best to you. Maurice
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May 8, 2021 at 8:56 PM
It sounds as though the beach brings out the boy in you Tim. We always had fun growing up at the beach looking for shells, each one a treasure. I have found other treasures at the beach as well like jewelry. One time I found a gold wheel necklace with gemstones in it. No one was around or I would have tried to find the owner.I still have that necklace. I enjoyed your poem my friend. Blessings Connie
Theraven Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 9:22 AM
Timothy, Your woodpeckers brought me here to this doorstep of nature. The title intrigued me too. Pockets hold a special meaning in many of my writes. You bring a better coastal buffet than the one I'm used to. I could feel the wet sand between toe's; that vague alarm at the approaching foamy waves. Wonder at which of the Earth's oceans your prized keepsakes would best represent. My pick would be Southern. Happy trails. -Richard
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April 26, 2021 at 2:40 AM
It's a lovely obsession though. We have very few beaches in Malta surrounded by the sea - no ocean. Lovely thoughts though.
Hankins Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 9:04 PM
Very interesting and well-written, Timothy. I especially enjoyed your asides in parentheses. Give us some more!
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