Get Your Premium Membership

Plotting the Path

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Unseeking Seeker.


heart is where desires are born and also where they die upon our reaching exhaustion whereupon we shift into deep silence receptive to the bliss current filling us 21-June-2021 Ring my Bell Poetry Contest Sponsor: John Anderson Syllable counts: 1, 2, 4, 6, 8, 10, 8, 2, 1,

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/8/2021 5:08:00 PM
Great verse, US, congratulations on your win. Eve
Login to Reply
Seeker Avatar
Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/8/2021 6:43:00 PM
Thank you, Eve :)
Date: 7/8/2021 1:52:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this (and the photo), making me self-reflect... God bless you.
Login to Reply
Seeker Avatar
Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/8/2021 2:22:00 AM
Happy you dropped by, Beata!
Date: 7/7/2021 9:07:00 PM
Beautifully Written. Congratulations!
Login to Reply
Seeker Avatar
Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/7/2021 9:19:00 PM
Oh! Is the contest judged? I’ll have a look. Thanks for your visit, Chris!
Date: 6/21/2021 5:04:00 AM
Alas, we are born to die.
Login to Reply
Seeker Avatar
Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/21/2021 6:40:00 AM
True. Birth at each breath intake, death with each exhalation.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things