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Pleiades G

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GENTLENESS Gather your clothes my love Garments woven and warm Gloves against winter cold Glance my way, smile softly Grab my face and kiss me Guard my fragile heart please Give me hope, I love you *** Checked with Howmanysyllables For contest Pleiades G Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/9/2017 9:56:00 PM
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Congrats, Darren - lovely poem!
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Darren White
Date: 2/10/2017 3:28:00 AM
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Agnes, thank you :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 2/9/2017 9:20:00 PM
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Darren, this is a sweet romantic poem with smooth flowing lines! Congrats on your placement! Blessings, Kim
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Darren White
Date: 2/10/2017 3:28:00 AM
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Kim, thank you SO much for my placement, I am honoured :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 2/9/2017 8:43:00 PM
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How lovely, Darren. Like the meter and flow. Congrats and blessings, Janis.
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Darren White
Date: 2/10/2017 3:27:00 AM
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Thank you, you too Janis :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/9/2017 8:31:00 PM
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Very romantic Pleiades, Darren! Congrats on your win :)
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Darren White
Date: 2/10/2017 3:27:00 AM
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Oh, thank you! You too :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 12/19/2016 9:48:00 PM
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Lovely and soft. Good luck in the contest.
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Darren White
Date: 12/19/2016 11:42:00 PM
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Thank you, Janis. I love my little poem, and we'll see what happens.
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 12/6/2016 7:06:00 PM
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Such a pretty poem! Good luck in the contest, Darren!
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Darren White
Date: 12/6/2016 11:37:00 PM
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Thanks Tamal, always a challenge, poems like this, but so rewarding when it flows smoothly :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/4/2016 5:18:00 PM
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wow, I absolutely LOVE this one. My third or fourth favorite in this contest!!
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Darren White
Date: 12/4/2016 10:58:00 PM
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Thanks Andrea :) We'll see what happens.
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 12/4/2016 11:33:00 AM
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ohh, so affectionate i feel the thrill, darren... well delivered; huggs
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Darren White
Date: 12/4/2016 12:22:00 PM
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Nette, thank you so much, I hoped it would work, and apparently it did :)
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Alexis Y.
Date: 12/4/2016 7:22:00 AM
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Hi Darren, This is so beautiful and romantic. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/4/2016 4:11:00 AM
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Gentle is this kiss of sweetness.good luck Darren
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Darren White
Date: 12/4/2016 7:14:00 AM
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Thank you, Tim :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/3/2016 7:44:00 PM
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This is sweet and lovely.
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Darren White
Date: 12/3/2016 11:14:00 PM
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Thanks so much, Richard :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/3/2016 6:15:00 PM
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aww you are so romantic my friend I wish I could write like this but I guess humour is my forte!:-) hugs jan xx7
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Darren White
Date: 12/3/2016 11:14:00 PM
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I am an old romantic, what can I say.... ;)
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 12/3/2016 4:15:00 PM
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That's really sweet Darren :) good luck on the contest :*
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Darren White
Date: 12/3/2016 11:14:00 PM
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Thanks Claudia <3
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Becca Teagan
Date: 12/3/2016 2:52:00 PM
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Aw this is very sweet, Darren.
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Darren White
Date: 12/3/2016 2:56:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Rebecca :)

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