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Pleiades

Please write more Pleiades. Patiently I wait. You Pen your seven lines to Ponder. Six lines unfold, Plus a seventh. And now-- Pandora's box, words on Parchment penned in silver. Written 4/11/21 for Kim Merryman's P Pleiades Contest Won Fourth Place

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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/16/2021 3:39:00 AM
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Good one. Enjoyed reading your winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 4/16/2021 2:53:00 PM
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Thank you, Sara. God bless you.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/14/2021 9:03:00 AM
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Dear Carol, your silver pen spills golden ink. I admire your clever poetic skills in creating this poetic gem. The use of the letter "P" is smooth and builds lush imagery to a grand finale. Congratulations on your lovely win, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 4/16/2021 2:52:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Susan. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/13/2021 7:12:00 AM
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- Congratulations on your win ... a greeting with a silver pen, Carol :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 4/13/2021 9:03:00 AM
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Yep, silver pen, and all. Thanks, Anna-Lise. It was fun to write.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/12/2021 1:15:00 PM
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Carol, this was very clever! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 4/13/2021 6:59:00 AM
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Thank you, Kim. It was fun. Blessings, Carol Louise
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/11/2021 4:10:00 PM
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A great Pleiades -good luck in the contest!
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 4/13/2021 6:58:00 AM
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Thank you, Caren.
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Kathleen Austin
Date: 4/11/2021 3:12:00 PM
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Haha, I certainly enjoyed this! Very meta, writing a Pleiades about Pleiades poems!
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